this was a good story

This story moves very fast and the realtionships change too quickly without explanation, the stereotype 'Gothic' Harry is a shame, the style is not bad only its over the top and when people leave hospital they don't dress like that or say 'I'm going to shock everyone' this character is a bit fake and sounds like an 11 year old finding himself and looking like a bit of an idiot. Lita? sounds like Severus' lost daughter or something equally silly. There's too much self explanation, it just seems a bit self righteous.

How old is harry in this story? you havent said so far. i am gussing since you said the beatings did not get bad until after third year that he is like fourteen now but then you metion never letting what happend to serius happen to any one else and the reminds me of 5th year. so i was wondering if you could tell me please. is he 14 or 16 now?

I loved it!

shes riddles daughter, oh god I wanna hurl :P its good, but thats just, yuck, yeah, I mean the preg bit in the story is great but cheesy? sorry :P

wow, suprisingly good, I loved the 2nd paragraph and how it all wasnt as it seems, was beautifully described, and Harry with cool clothes, tattoos, withdrawal symptoms and now a werwolf, I mean where can you go wrong :D really good first chapter, really drew me in :P the only thing I didnt like was 'gothic' clothes :P I dunno, just naming it like that in a story just kinda gives him a label, i kinda prefer him to be, grungy angsting teenager :P but I guess its just an opionion ;P

Well Done. I thought this was well writen and I enjoyed reading it.

I liked it. Now I'm going to read the original idea in the other one. Good work.

Chapter Fifteen-at least they snapped him out of that pretty damn quick.

Chapter Sixteen-ooh. Well written that one. I like the way you think. especially at the end there. That is definitely true.

Chapter Seventeen-beautifully written. This was an awesome story. I’m sad its over. I’ll have to add to my favorites and my c2.

Chapter Eleven-shame on you Severus. *Laughs* This was well written as everything before has been.

Chapter Twelve-that’s cool. I hadn’t expected Draco to have an animagus.

Chapter Thirteen-wait. I thought he was going as an apprentice not a student?

Chapter Fourteen-you probably don’t want to know many of the names I just called you. I thought it may be her but I was hoping beyond hell that it was some random character he was friends with that hadn’t been introduced. Poor baby. *Clucks tongue*

Chapter Eight-there never seems to be a solid plan for harry. He just jumps around.

Chapter Nine-at least they figured out the plan. I bet Dumbledore is pissed that he’s missing though.
(Go girl. Finally nice to actually know someone’s out there and not afraid to say it.)

Chapter Ten-interesting. So he can actually talk to the wolf that is in essence him as well. Why Solo? I like the name, just wondering.

Chapter Five-I could never do that. Even with the death wish I have, they would do worse than kill me.

Chapter Six-oh god. What I was actually thinking about came true. That’s creepy, but at least he’ll have a family. Young or not.

Chapter Seven-whoa. That’s something to take in. At least she understands. I like her.

Chapter Two-oh he’ll probably say to send him back. Well written.

Chapter Three-I think I’ll like this story.

Chapter Four-ha ha! Will he tell him he was originally a Slytherin?

ouch, his life is hell.

I LUVED IT! U should write a sequel! It could be about Alex's life growing up, you know? lolz!!