So what, vampires are animals? I think not.

Started out good, but I'm afraid I've just lost interest in your story.

Yes she's turning blue it's true
Oh Violet you are now bright blue

Once upon a chocolate time
A long long chocolate time ago
The golden age of chocolate began

Someday sweet as a song
Charlie's lucky day will come along

We never ever dared to think
That there would be a golden time
When bang! in a glorious golden blink
Our lives have become sublime

While some kids study books of verse
I play "Destroy the Universe"

I want a feast
I want a bean feast
Cream puffs and doughnuts and fruit cakes with no nuts
Give it to me NOW

Ve give him
Fruit juice for breakfast, plus melons and mangos
Cereals, bananas, and cream

Who can take a sunrise
Sprinkle it with dew
Cover it in chocolate and a miracle or two

I just finsished catching up, this is the second time I've started reading this, and I think it's very interesting!

I can't wait to see what happens next.

How could you do this ! it was a good story but now you destroyed it i aint gonna read this anymore!

very surprised at how cool this fic is. seer twin, kinda squib harry, semi cannon harry from AU, confusing draco, voldemort coming back and is smartish. hope you decide to continue it one day.

one thing i didn't like is vampire animagus. doesn't make sense to me because vampires aren't animates or magical animals. i'm not even sure if they count as magical creatures. i think they are more like cursed humans.

Sorry, but from a strong start, this thing is going nowhere plotwise. Also you need to pay attention to tenses. You tend to switch without warning.

Actually, you can faint forwards, though it must be rare. I did when I was ten.

harry isn't stupid in the canon - he's just about as intelligent as any boy his age

Huh... I seriously don't know what is happening...
But anyways this story seems to be practically abondoned... (or maybe in hiatus), I guess I should stop reading in case its stops somewhere in limbo. Anyway, you had a wonderful beginning to the story... But it went off somewhere in the middle.
Anyway, I won't say much about the later chapters, but the starting was very good...
adios...

I don't know... This story started off so wonderfully... And now it seems to just go from one angst to the other... Will Harry ever get his magic back or are you going to make him kill (if) by a gun or something...
God, this has to be one of the most twisted story I have seem... You're either a brilliant writer or you're just letting your imagination run wild without much direction and making up a story.
By the way, I still have my fingers crossed and your story is still in my fav.s

If it isn't for all the previous good chapters, I would have asked you to go f* yourself for this chapter... What the hell is that ??
Why can't he just go back to his friends to wherever they went when they died... He has Dumble's and he is such a coward, that he can't face the next great adventure. He and Voldie doesn't have an ounce of difference. Both are afraid of facing death and cowards in the core...
You had had such a great story going and you do all but completely crush it... Hope it'll make some good meaning in the consequent chapters... (fingers crossed)

I'm curious where you got your info saying that people faint backwards. I just looked at a WikiHow article on Pretending to Faint that says, "People who faint or pass out usually do so going forward not backward, so forward and to the side would be the safest." It seems this would be especially true if the person passing out had just been running forwards since momentum should continue to carry them in that direction.

If the-boy-who-lived is more like canon Harry, in terms of house and looks, why not call him Harry and have dear little lightning bolt twin have some cool name?

You do realize that bad vision is in fact entirely an inherited, genetic thing, right?

update soon