wow. i can just imagine aki flying into a rage

Wait a minute...I didn't see any evidence that Akito really did have sex with Kureno in this. Only that Shigure saw something and MIGHT have jumpt to conclucions. So did Akito have sex with Kureno in this or not?

Shigure! THAT BITCH! Anyway I thought the story was so intense BUT, I absolutly enjoyed it! Pleaseeeee update!( ren hater) ( akitoXshigure fan) I'll always be on akitos side...well maybe not always 4 EVERYTHING!

Do I have to leave constructive criticisms? Can I just say that I thought this was wonderfully done. You struck right at the heart of all of it-the bitchiness and the conniving-and you didn't pull any punches. You let Shigure be the bastard that he was in this case, yet you let him be hurt and angry. I loved the line "...Hatori learned never to cross Shigure... Shigure knew exactly what he had to do to completely and utterly destroy someone." TRUE. I have to admit I love Shigure, but he can be merciless. You showed that beautifully. I loved this story!

but love is always selfish isnt it? heh. poor shigure and akito *cries* why cant they all be happy?

you've written this very well, i enjoyed it very much

Love it so far.

I really did like this. It's short and sweet and to the point, but does plenty of heart-pulling through the entire thing. You've got a good knack for their conversations, making them sound very natural.

I adore the last scene, of the two of them in the bathroom...it's just so sweet, and sad, and desperate, and it fits in perfectly.

Excellent job!

TTFN

Katia-chan

*cries* OMG! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON I CRIED SO MUCH! PPZ! UPDATE!

So all in all they kind of deserve one another don't they?

This triangle is painful thing to see and read... they are both so stubborn and when one does something the other does something just to strike back and to add insult to injury when he leaves he takes Yuki with him that being another kick.

Kureno is another character I feel so sorry for he is being used she cares for him I know at some level but he is indeed being used and gets a short end of the whole situation.

But I truly hate Ren she is such a pychoctic character.

This was very good )

xD I love your comment about Shigure and Akito at the end xD

Anyways, wow, more drama builds up, I like how you put Hatori's thoughts into it, especially the part with not crossing Shigure.

very well done, i really like how theres no real ending. i must say your writing improved greatly since when you first did this story. and you havent updated anything in a while!

Wow, that was very good. It showed how Akito really felt.

another great Akkigure story!

please more!

I think she would react like that especially with how much she hates Ren and for Shigure to actually do that *wince* Hope to see the next part to this :)

Sorry you've only gotten like 6 reviews. It's a really good story! Don't give up because people are too lazy to review!