uhm...the unedited version doesn´t work...

Ah, the dreaded cold feet. It was a cute one-shot.

I found a filler. Yey, and I saw that sequel. YES!

This was a great middle piece.
It was a cute and short story.
Easy to read and yet with much to say.
I have also read the unedited version and
I really think you have edited it well since you full well know what's going on and you make the pieces fit.
This one was great to...

Enzeru

beautiful as always^^

i first read this on your LJ. i expected it to be beta'd by now but i still find the same grammatical flaws. Your originality in your first KKM though was absolutely outstanding, and i have enjoyed reading that particular fic. I am sort of disappointed in this "filler" though, as you call it, but i attribute the lesser quality of this to your hesitation in writing lemons. i am looking forward to "The Consummate Oath". keep on writing! =D