I'm speechless. This is so sad, so desperate, so lonely... So Death note. Thank you for writing it.

...I...I...I LOVE IT!

Sweet and sad... Raito IS going to go crazy if he continues like this... Speaking of which, it's L's craziness, not crazy, which is contagious.

sweet. in a sad sugary way

This was beautiful, and puts another light on Walls. I don't think I've seen Light characterized in quite the way that you have, and it's very refreshing. Yes, that's it, that's the word to describe your writing. Refreshing.

wahh this is extremely sad i feel so sad for both of them T_T
you've portrayed the loneliness perfectly
the loneliness that i see in both characters as i watch the anime, something that only fulfilled by each other
and now that they are separated by life and death
that loneliness blares itself to the extreme
very well written!

I liked that a lot. Anything with character analysis is good and you wrote it accurately and interestingly.

I know what it feels like. wainting for an answer so desperatly, and deep inside you know it won't come coz the other one, he's dead. But hoping he's still nearby and trying to answer, that's what keeps you going. And you so wish you could go crazy, a bit more than you already are, just to hear his comforting voice in your ear, saying that he will always hate you for getting him killed, that he will always love for crying for him. And you don't know what to believe anymore coz in your eyes, everyone seems dead, all except him. In death, he's even more alive...
hum...sorry for my rambling, but your story... feels a bit like mine. gomen

Love and Kisses

I like this, even if it was a 2 amer

And here comes a review at an insane time of the night. XD

I don't mind the absence of plot -- the writing style works well with this sort of drabble thing. I find that there are plenty of regret stories, but... nonetheless, I appreciate the style.

that was good writing!i kinda thought that Raito forced himself to kill L, after L declared that Raito was his first friend.TT_TT