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Reviews For: Falls Apart

miamijuggler 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abuseErm... I don't see a button here for "Standing Ovation." Really beautiful stuff. Usually at this point, I try to offer some constructive criticism, and point out helpful ways that you could improve your writing. But quite honestly, I don't see anything that needs work. I'm speechless. Really, HONESTLY, I'm afraid that my review of your fic might seem dull or lackluster, but that's only because I lack the words to properly praise this story. A wonderful, amazing fic. Keep up the good work!
Defining Aerith 2008-03-22 ch 1,	abuseI remember reading this once and just gasping. Literally gasping, chills running up and down my spine. I just didn't have a name then, so now I have one and I'm so thankful for this story. It's beautiful, can't believe I almost forgot about it. You write with the heart as well, I see. :) I love this. Good job. Speechless really. ♥ Aer
asga 2006-09-12 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is nice keep it up ne
Maiden Cheza 2006-09-09 ch 1,	abuse...You've left me speechless. So beautiful...I saw it all, I didn't just read the words, I understood the meaning in them. I didn't just enjoy your story, I fell in love with it. Great is the least of words to describe this fanfic. To put it simple...This is one of the most beautiful pieces of writings I've ever read. Keep up the EXCELLENT work!
KADavid 2006-09-09 ch 1,	abuseI almost didn't write a review for your story. Not because I didn't like it: because I didn't think I could express properly the feelings that the story brought to me. It moves between light and dark, joy and sorrow, pain and enlightenment so effortlessly I had to pause sometimes to just absorb it all. See. The words just aren't enough for what I want to say. Thats it. You don't write. You paint with words. Thanks for sharing it. David
Beeria 2006-09-08 ch 1,	abuseAw! Happy endings rule! Good job

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