waw...such profound explanation from haruka-san..^^..such depth..^_^

This is one of the best xholic I've read so far. I like the way that the Shizuka is in-character and the story ties in little details from manga. The best of all - it's not a romantic fic...

Alana: Lovely just love'd the way this was written, has alot of meaning in it!

Evo: and it makes you think ^_^

Yes, this was slightly spoilerish ^_^ But I love spoilers, and this was a great way of spoiling me, because I'm sure when Clamp reveals these little details, they'll do it in that annoying way of theirs that requires a lot of thought and clarification. So this was a great way to explain things, and gave me a lot of insight into things that had gone on in the manga that I hadn't quite understood the reason for. Aside from that, it was also written in a very... hm, simple but not _boring_ or amateurish style at all, just straightforward and not confusing at all, but still descriptive. Great little ficlet, it was really really interesting to read!

I liked it...it's nice to have an outlook on doumeki instead of watanuki for a change. I like it! I love Haruka and i think you covered him pretty well.