Oh, I just *love* how at the moment of death, instead of Lily's life flashing before her eyes, it is Harry's life that does. That is just brilliant!

What a concept. I like that you've reworked seeing your past at the moment of death into seeing your son's future. I thought it was very original and I enjoyed reading this story.

Never stop writing.

-bella

wow. that was an absolutely touching and wonderful story!

Wow... Excellent oneshot. A great feeling comes from it.

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aw! *tear* that was great!! i never pictured lily seeing all those things. well, i never really dwelled on the night lily and james died, though i'm sure it's important.

i loved how you put the HHr thing in it! ^_^

it was a bit depressing, but very enlightening anyway!

Oh, wow... That was so beautifully, tragically sad... I'm sitting in class reading it, and then I reach the end, trying hold back all the tears that are filling my eyes! Gah! Aw, it was so beautiful!

Wonderful story! ^_^ Angsty sweetness.

Interesting, I liked it.

If you have the time, check out my own HP fic "An Arranged Marriage" =)

Wonderful, as always, and heartwrenching to boot. It was, however, excellent and very moving. I love how Lily's final thought is that her death is worth it, very touching. I loved it, and of course I adored the HHr you worked in. Keep up the good work!

Cheers,

Madm_05

Aww, I'm blushing :-) I'm surprised that you managed to rework this so quickly. I believe you've broken the record among the authors I have beta read for.

As I said before, this story is depressing enough to make me like it. It has this sort of tragic finality that I try to attain in my own work. I noticed two or three tiny inattention errors, but nothing serious.

One of the things that set this story apart from others I have read about the night of Halloween 1981 is that here, Lily hasn't lost the fiery temper we've seen in OotP, and then there's also the non-clichéd ending where Harry's future (and not her own past) flashes before her eyes. I particularly like that you included the HHr pairing in this, if for no other reason than to continue the family tradition - established by James - of falling in love with a Muggle-born.

Like i sed 2 stories before that are this good, i dont kno one no 1's reveiwed it, it was GREAT, i loved the part were lily see's harry growing old an gettin with Hermione, i love this so much plz tell me if u right another 1, vik X.