 Bluebird Soaring 2008-03-25 . chapter 11Way to put it all in perspective, Jazz!! Just as I was wondering what the fallout would be from the Twins/Ratchet med bay incident... And I can totally see Jack being much more at ease with the new life/new mechs than Ratchet. Jack is more of a social bot, although it looks like he helps Ratch break the ice too. And comparing the energon to solvent for the win =) |
 Okami-chan 2008-03-24 . chapter 11Somehow or the other, I completely missed seeing this on your LJ. I _saw_ it, but it disappeared so fast I didn't have the chance to read it.
I like the idea that the energon the Autobots receive is substandard to what most of the populace is used to.
A month in (possibly more for Jack), and Ratchet and Wheeljack haven't really changed. Does this mean that they'll change later on? A month is nothing to a Transformer, so I can see it not carrying much weight at the moment. Are we going to have the opportunity to see them realize that the things they believed before may not exactly be the same things they hold dear now? (We saw a brief glimpse of that in regrets, when Ratchet admitted that he wanted to see the Cons dead). |
 Dragowolf 2008-03-24 . chapter 11LOVE IT! It is so cute and that last line is great! |
 TaintedTamer 2008-03-24 . chapter 11Lol, great chapter. I can picture Sunstreaker putting Ratch in a head-lock and then getting pwned. XD |
 getaiyou 2008-03-24 . chapter 11Wow, what a life. I am just positively excited for Wheeljack and Blue. YAY! Go Go Go GO!! |
 Elita One 2008-03-23 . chapter 11poor ratch, hes having trouble adjusting |
 flamingmarsh 2008-03-23 . chapter 11good chapter. |
 TaintedTamer 2008-03-01 . chapter 1Awesome, lol. :D Wheeljack is by far my fav Transformer, so I'll be reading all of these. |
 Bluebird Soaring 2008-02-26 . chapter 10Another grand slam! I can just see Prowl not quite understanding what Ratchet is up to or why he can't just let well enough alone when given percentages of success! Prowl is "worried" in his own way since Ratchet has made himself a target standing where he is, but can't see the logic in his need to wait there for Wheeljack and the twins. And Ratchet is deadly honest with Prowl about his level of trust...great ending too btw =) |
 flamingmarsh 2008-02-26 . chapter 10hey you should do more with Smokescreen and Wheeljack and chapter 10 was pretty good. I would be worried to! |
 GreendEATHpop 2008-01-11 . chapter 9'Bout time Wheeljack got some love.
I love these stories. |
 Bluebird Soaring 2008-01-11 . chapter 9You did it! Well, you flirted with it =) That was perfect...I hope your next chappy continues this direction...'Jack needs some TLC too =) |
 flamingmarsh 2008-01-11 . chapter 9i love your story! keep up the good work ^-^ and could you do one on Wheel Jack and Smokescreen? |
 caz 2008-01-11 . chapter 9 *facepalm*
why didn't i see that before? lol
thinkin' about it, poor smokey, how long's HE had a thing for Jack and had to watch him pining over Ratch? oh, that's ... owwy.
well, hopefully Jack straightens out and gives big blue smokey some lovin'. |
 Strata Taisen 2007-09-17 . chapter 8The stories are wonderful~! I felt so sad for Wheeljack in the last one though. ;-; The poor 'bot~! *cuddles him*
Hope to see more in the future~! x3 |