“We’re not going to kill you,” Scofield says to Mahone instead.
“I appreciate that,” Mahone says dryly, though he expects Burrows to bring the butt of the gun around and into contact with the back of his skull at any moment.

Lovely, lovely work. This should happen on the show... So how did they all end up here? Please keep writing!

I loved this! It would be fantastic to have such a scene in canon, because Mahone sure is on the wrong side of the fence ;)

(_nightelf at LJ)

Excellent. The two working together would be absolutely unstoppable...I'm glad I found a Mahone fic, I've come to really like his character.
Nice job!

That was so cool! I like Mahone a lot and I always wished he would team up with Michael; they'd be invincible together. They're both equally genius...and hot!

Very nicely written story! A fair characterization of Mahone, a character whom I have grown to enjoy in these first few episodes! Keep up the good work!

Very nicely written. Made me shiver. Your writing expresses that you got into both Mahone's and Michael's heads pretty well. Great job.