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I love you.

You make such a beautiful, heartwrenching point so eloquently, as always. I adore utterly the way it starts, little tidbit of scene that reminds me of every scene I've ever read of those two, in manga or fanfiction.

Then the body of it, with the throwback from what she did to what it made them do... It's so true; when one person plays one role, it kind of makes others play the opposing one. Like how with two siblings one tends to end up being the "good" kid, one the "bad."

The whole idea that she did it on purpose-y, too, is just myfic. Never would have thought of that.

And naturally I just break down and cry at the last line. Such a little thing, only... not...

So glad you're writing again. Also so glad I got shared dedication here. I'm on par with Shinju! Feel the powah.

I have a full day ahead of me, during which I have to be able to focus on other things, so I'm going to go and try to let this settle into my brain. Must make it stop jumping and grabbing.

That was very moving indeed. I congratulate you. Please update soon.

Summary is a bit more in-depth than "Once upon a time... it involves Ren, Hatori, and Akito... the end." And a bit more comprehensive, too.

Yay, I rock!

As a writer's-block-breaking drabble, I must say... Wow.

Definately... wow. Muchly like the ideas here. Much food for thought... which I enjoy.

I have no good words to describe. Make them appear, nice awe-ful [... full of awe...] [I had... something that began with an e...] words of praise!

Oh, enamoured sounds good. Stick that in there somewhere, I think that was my e word.

Suffice to say review is not doing it justice...

-Shinju

I love Ren personally, she is a great character with an interesting perspective on the curse. This clearly illustrated what Ren did to influence Akito's life and in turn the lives of the Juunishi. But to be fair, Ren wanted her to treat the Juunishi well.

The story got me thinking, so good job. I'll be looking forward to more!