I love this so far! I can't wait to read more, and I'm anxious to see how they get out of the caves =)

Great story! Action, adventure, and a alien civilization. Then lots of love and romance weaved through it all.

Thanks so much for writing!
CindyLou

great story YOu did well, I am glad you finished it :)

Wonderful job! Both versions were just wonderful.

Great ending.

Well, can't say I'm not disappointed that this story has come to an end. It was really great, and you've managed to bring it to a close on a good high note.

The little edited version of the shower scene was nice, and I'd have to say it's a pity you couldn't have put the full version here as well(I read the other version, thought it was great).
The remark about someone catching them and turning Daniel into a legend was funny. Almost makes you wish someone did catch them.

“I’ll remember you said that when we’re old and our idea of a good night of sex is if we actually got into the same bed together." As for that why do I get the feeling that they'd be one of those couples that wont have problems in that area in their old age.

The team BBQ and the image of Vala trying to flip burgers was amusing. And the ending with Vala admiting that she wanted to understand Daniel's work better because it was important to him was really sweet, as was his reply to her.

Anyways, great story, hope to see future D/V stories from you.

this is a really good story, sad to see it end, but all good things must come to an end.

great ending

I liked the end of this chapter.

GREAT chapter! Love the resolution of the suie problem and the sweet moments camping :D But most of all, LOVED LOVED LOVED the ending, how could I do otherwise? ^_~ I sincerely and completely hope that you're going to be expanding on that little teaser at the end!! Even if you want to post it just on your LJ or something! Pretty pretty pretty please? :D

I somehow find the Suie to be very adorable. Great chapter, as usual. I look forward to the next chapter.

can't wait for the last :( chapter!

Loved the way everyone reacted when Sam just pushed the button on the machine. That has got to be the easy way they've ever had to turn off some machine of doom. And bonus they managed to get a supply of the funky fuel.

And you've finally done the infamous shower scene. Had a good chuckle at Daniel's initial reaction. Hope no one goes to check up on them anytime soon. Though I could picture Cam going back to the others bright red stammering about the image lodged in his head.

ahh...push of a button eh...if snakes had hands, there'd be no story!

this is a great story, can't wait to check out the last chapter (on that note, good cliffie by the way :)! )

That was adorable. I bet you didn't even know that. hehehe. Daniel became the hero once again and Vala stood by him, right or wrong. Everything turned out alright, and to think Vala almost disappointed our little archeologist. hehehe Sweet. :D