You are a secret minx! I LOVE your stories. Um, my hubby LOVES your stories more than I do cause he, um, shall we say... benefits from them?!? LOL!! Keep up the excellent work Star!

I've just read this fic for the THIRD time, lol, and it's just so great! It maskes me smile so much, and it's so easy to picture the characters - love it, love you, hope that wherever you are, everything's great!

Wow, this story was absolutely unbelievably awesome! I can't believe it was your first fic. I'm new to the fandom and I've been gobbling up fics like crazy, and this one is absolutely the best I've read so far out of the literally HUNDREDS I've read. Big fat kudos to you, your fanfiction-fu is made of win!

Wow, you drag your characters through non-angsty agony with almost Rowling-esque panache. I love it even though I CAN'T STAND IT!!

Absolutely, completely, totally adoring this fic so far - it's six kinds of awesome. And it's possibly "final salvo" rather than "final tally" that you meant at the end of the chap.

LOL! That was great! I sure hope there is a sequel posted...

Oh my god... I am seriously cringing at the awkwardness that is sure to await me in the next chapter... :D

This story is just excellent so far, wonderful job!

Well, in your AN, you said something about losing readers, well you gained some as well, very nicely done. I have passed this story along like dip at a party.

What an absolutey yummy story! Great writing, and WOW - that was one long first time! You had mentioned in an a.n. that you thought you lost readers because of the smut, but it had me hooked. You are very talented. Thanks for the story!

You write the best sex scenes!:):):) Damn! Every girl needs a Bobby in my opinion... Plus the story was interesting

I had to review this story after I read this all in one sitting last night. It was funny and emotional and smutty all in one. I am starting the sequel tonight and hopefully part 3 (which I cannot find) and part 4. What is the name of part 3? It is not listed in the summaries of your other stories as part 3 so I am lost as to what the name of part 3 is. Anyway the characters of Goren/Eames were done well. I am very interested in the sequel to find out how they are going to handle the work situation and all. Anyway off to reading. I am also going to read your other stories too. You look like you write well from what I have read so far.

I've reviewed this before on amorousintent under my preferred penname Shadow, but I have to say it here, too. This story is flawless. I've tried, in the nature of helpful critism, to come up with *something* I could help you improve, and I'm just not finding it. To this day, after having read it about five times, I still find it hard to believe this is your first fanfiction. I hope you're writing some original stuff that might be eligible for publication. Particularly romance novels.

very nicely done!

Alright...here's the story...As we know I was planning on continuing reading you after reading Keepsake (and if you don't remember...I did...). So I started reading this and at the time it seemed I had missed any episode that made it look like Bobby was a bit of a ladies man and even moreso I did not like the Shiela thing. I am so sorry I doubted you. It will never happen again. She went away in like the next chapter, right after I stopped reading and I knew I was regretting not finishing this so although it took me a while (I also went to California which distracted me more), I have finally read it...And adored it...And I promise this time around that I mean it when I say I will continue reading. Once again, I'm very sorry for doubting you.

Very interesting, shifting POV in mid-story. That confrontation could have gone much worse, but I suspects things are going to get very uncomfortable for Bobby very quickly. I give him credit for sticking to his guns. I hope he doesn't come out of this too much worse for the wear.