I think this one is really nice. I really enjoy the way you characterize Severus in this one, and him planning out the furnishings and being upset about it was awesome.

A very sweet idea and well executed. Well done!

Oh boy! Man that was some powerful magic! Harry, Snape and Madam Pomfrey managed to regenerate Ron and Hermione completly and healed everyone else too! I gotta get me that power it would be so cool!

Well that's a VERY interesting way to do PR. Man Luna should do press conferences more often: people'd get a laugh instead of die of bordom. I could use her help tommorow night: there's gonna be a hell of a lot of politicans where I'm going including our state representitive (ironicly a former mayor of my home town) and polticans BORE ME TO DEATH! Unfortunatly I have to stay for the ENTIRE THING!

Good but you made Harry seem a bit Bi with the whole loving both Ron and Hermione thing. I don't understand how their attempted sacrifice caused the spell to rebound as well as hit him and kill Voldemort. Oh and that was cool how they healed the entire hospital. Maybe they ought to get mortally wounded more often.

Great story. Really got me teared up. Snape is so stuborn, but I love him anyways. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I really like this~! It was serious and wonderful and soothing with gentle hints of humor! fantasitc!

More, more, please. I do like what you've done so far with this story, and would like to see what happens next. Pretty, please? Will Harry and Severus reach some kind of reproachment? Not just Harry saying it and wandering off, but actually getting to the point that they're friends of a sort? Severus has been so isolated, and if he can get over the resistance to the idea, with Harry, Hermione, and Ron knowing all this information, he could actually have some friends who see him as he really is, and give him someone to care for him now that Albus is gone. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

wow. that's an absolutely hilarious last line. dang. : )


this story rocks! i love harry, ron, and hermione's relationship, as well as the way they interact with snape. love it!

update soon, please, it's been months!

Oh god, I've just finished reading the stories and I just fecking ADORE IT SO MUCH!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, write more! D:

Really enjoyed the newspaper bit...actually, the whole chap :)

lol, funny that you practically answered my comment at the top of this chap :D Still disagree on the spoilt thing though..

Anyhoo, I really loved this chapter, and I'm looking forward to where you're going with this story :)

I really like the story so far :), though I disagree that Snape would still think Harry is spoiled after the Occlumency lessons they had- he saw Harry's memories. I don't think Snape even once compares Harry to his father after the lessons as he did before them. I can't ever recall Snape calling him spoilt either. I can see Snape thinking that he's arrogant, thoughtless, stupid, a dunderhead, lazy, a cheater, thinks he's above rules etc :P, but not spoilt. Actually, one of my pet 'theories' (if you can call it that) is that it was Snape that alerted either DD or the Order to Harry's homelife (as he saw in his memories...why does it just happen to be that year (the year he gave to Occlu. lessons) that the Order decided to tell the Dursleys off? And not any time before hand? But really, it's your story and it's fun to read anyway even if I do disagree:)

You know, I'm speechless about your story. Firstly I wasn't even going to comment because I couldn't come up with something to say, or a lot of babbling, but here on this site it would be unfair so here goes.

Sad, giggling, laughing, almost crying, elated - this is how I could describe myself while reading. Bookwormish delight too, no typos, no style falters to stumble at and brace yourself against.


Sara, I'm really impressed, chapeau*! *two thumbs up*

(*french for "I'm raising my hat to you")

I like the tentative truce and possibility for respect and mayhap even friendship to bloom that you've created. :)

SO much love for the internal commentary on the prophet article. (reminded me of this fan-fic author i know...)

i loved how he was softening towards harry, but couldn't quite be gracious. and how harry was patient and polite, but still in the end left feeling hurt. just right. so real.

and poppy had me giggling along with her.

i love this fic.

Q