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SG-1Reader
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseDaniel reached an arm round to rest on her hip to gently guide her away from the shop, silently.

YUSS!! love that line!
Whirlwind421
2007-01-25
ch 1,
abuseGreat story! I loved it!
Myriadragon
2006-09-24
ch 1,
abuseAw...I love it. The image of Vala marrying Cam and Danny is priceless XP
Darkwing333
2006-09-10
ch 1,
abuseOh! I loved this story. The perfect mix of humour and saddness!! I loved it! !Please write more Vala stories soon!!
KateCayce
2006-09-10
ch 1,
abuseGreat job on the dialog! I could hear them as I read it.
BookWorm37
2006-09-09
ch 1,
abuseVery good story. That would explain how Vala got the outfit she was wearing in 'Memoir Mori'.
SG-Fan
2006-09-09
ch 1,
abuseThat was awesome!

I hope you write more Stargate SG-1 stories!
TheCrazySaz
2006-09-09
ch 1,
abuseHahahahahahaha! PERFECT! I knew you could pull it off! :D God Vala's so mean isnt she, those poor boys! I totally love how you had Sam totally not helping and getting so much amusement out of the guy's discomfort. Priceless! Awesome how you got a little 'real' Vala in there also with the mother thing, and even better how they all tried to cheer her up! Nice contrast to the boys initially not wanting to go at all! Totally loved this! Hope you write more Vala soon! :D
ChappaEyebrow
2006-09-09
ch 1,
abusenicely written vignette! thanks.
Izzles
2006-09-09
ch 1,
abuselol awesome story...just like Vala to suggest marriage so she could get a shiny ring...
very very funny!
xkawaiix
2006-09-09
ch 1,
abuseAwesome fic! Yay for team bonding! ^_^ Tis sad about Vala's daughter. =(
cherryblossomjen
2006-09-08
ch 1,
abuseIt's been a while since I read your stuff, but you're just as amazing a writer as I remember. You capture the characters perfectly.

Did I mention I especially love the ever so slight Cam/Vala vibe? Seriously, it was great.
the female apophis
2006-09-08
ch 1,
abuseHey hon!
This story was absolutely brilliant!
I loved the dialogue! So funny!
Love ya lots!
-Jo
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