this is really good. i love the Sirius/James vs Sirius/Regulus relationship! good job xx

i really liked it!

Just as good as the first. You are really talented, but you know what you have to do now?

Write another! lol

Yes, now you must write one of what Sirius says to Remus. Or else.

Just kidding. _

Really good, though. You are amazing! Keep writing!