This is deep. Bittersweet. And I love it! It's sad, but it's good. You hvae a gift.

NO! IT BURNS! IT BURNS! NOT SPARROWBETH, NO!

Other than that, can't wait to continue with the next chapters you have put up.

Um... good. This is kinda... umm... freaky? “Mr. William Turner & Ms. Elizabeth Swann cordially invite you to there wedding which is to take place on the 13th of August in the year of 1764.” FeREKEY!

Wow! OMG! I LOVED this story! I read it all during one of my classes. My eyes were glued to the computer screen while my professor was talking to us. LOL. Yay! Willizabeth! I just hope Elizabeth isn't like this in the third movie. Wow. LOL. GREAT story! Really sad and it almost made me cry but I loved it! Great job!

*le gasp*

The first decent Willabeth story I've read in months! Hooray for you!

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Thatw as really sad but I loved it.

You write beautifully. I enjoyed this story, and I almost cried! I'm off to read more of your stories!

Oh my god, I had to stop reading her letter to William to stop from crying! THIS STORY IS AMAZINGLY GOOD! (although, as a woman, i'd expect her to be a little more angry at Jack for shooting Will). Also, I heard that you hate spelling mistakes. (Guess what? ME TOO! omg, it drives me UP. THE. WALL!)

Dammit, why did you make me cry? Great job so far!

I'm so sorry that I didn't review sooner. I wish I had. What a great chapter. Please update soon!

I really don't like Elizabeth in this story. Hopefully she won't be this sluttish in the third movie, and hopefully Will won't have his heart broken.

love this ! keep up with the updates_

I'm confused...maybe another chapter will unconfuse me?(hint hint, update PLEASE!)

OMG! Fantastic. I really like that you're going back to the previous events! Keep writing!