thank you so much for the summary! it was VERY considerate of you to leave this for your readers, so few authors who leave a story unfinished do this - i really appreciate this.

Lalala... I can probably read these series several times and never get tired of it. Hahah... :D

That was good. Though i really almost cried when Greta got hurt. Im glad there was a happy ending, but if you had taken the time to finish it it might have been better. Good job anyway though!

well,that's a nice summary though it would have been nice if it was an actual story but oh well...love this!!

omg...this is so sad...please do update!!

does this mean that you will not be updating the chapters anymore?

it's too bad that you couldn't finish it.. it sounded like it would have been really nice.. XD.. but who am i to criticize when i only ever finished one story myself?

good job, anyway.. :D

Well...um...aww.. ^^; It's a shame you're not properly finishing it, but thanks for posting this.

I'm more of a Wolfram and Yuuri together but no matter it would have been a really interesting and great story^^

Even though it's not long and drawn out I still get the sense as though I've read several chapters. Great summery.

OMG OMG OMG so SAD
i can't believe that you did that to lil Greata!!
uypdate soon!
make her ok!!

TY

Blue

Uhm. Wow! It was a nice day despite Yuri's worries and then all of a sudden the car hit her. Huh! It's like one of those stupid car insurance commercials. Wasn't expecting that at all.

WHOA. Again. Whe, the best present ever: a sequel!

but did you have to end with a cliffhanger? damn, it was just the good part too!

sorry for the rude words, but I was pretty hyped and all...it's awesome, by the way. is this going to be as long as the previous one?

anyway, update soon. can't wait.

later.XoXO
~mayumi~

This story is getting all the more interesting! I can't wait to see how it developes from here on out. I wonder if you'll implement some Murata/Wolfram romance along the way? It'd certainly make it more interesting..xD

Good plot! I'll definitely keep an eye on this fic. Can't wait for more! Keep up the amazing work.

I already read chapter 6 of this fic so that's where I'm reviewing. First, I'm glad I found your website (where all the NC-17 versions are available) and second, you made a sequel which is really what I am hoping for. I find your characterization of Murata better than the anime perhaps because of the circumstances available that led him to such wisdom but nonetheless, he has a very sturdy characterization. He is the key to Wolfram's survival on Earth and I would like to think Wolfram will spend more time discovering Earth before Yuuri comes back for him. Murata's observation about what Yuuri has to give up for Wolfram's world is eye opening to Wolfram as well to some readers like me. I'm sure Wolfram will find it hard to blend with the Earth's norm but it will be a fun one. I do hope that Greta's all right.