Jesus christ. I can't begin to tell you how much I do love that, and how much I've wanted to read something like that for a long time. The pages on the net are flooding with cliche-stuffed fictions (AU: highschool fics, cool!calm!Riku and naive!cute!Sora, etc) and not very original things, and this one... it's, it's WOW. It feels so real: it's the best interpretation of their relationship I've ever come upon. What striked me most, though, is the way you portrayed Sora's feelings upon 'landing in a forgotten world that's crushed by darkness' (something along these lines: generally meaning, that there's only darkness left and they're left there without any hope at all, just to wither away, so to say) - and with Riku, it feels all right. He's happy for Kairi and their other friends to be in the other world and SAFE, but he doesn't mind being in such a situation (the withering-away thing, them in the darkness/forgotten etc) himself, as long as Riku's there, it'd be fine. As long as he'd have Riku, there could come what may. I also loved the way you described their relationship changing, and the seemingly casual banter ('i always figured i was better at stuff than you' etc) bearing so much more background and emotions than both of them want, can, admit. It's really, really, really beautiful. I admire your skill to take up their personalities like that, and the way you re-wrote the scene,... just took my breath away. I am entranced by the portrayal of them landing in Nothingness, and being oddly content to be there, just because they're with each other. This means they care for each other on such a profound level that the other one has become a part of their life. It's like - Riku's Sora's other half, as well as Sora's Riku's. They're not whole without each other. They could go on living, sure, but nothing would feel complete. I love the idea that they complete each other.

OMG I could go on ranting like forever. Just, really, I am so in love with this and thank you so, so much for writing and sharing it. Such a beautiful, perfect portrayal of the scene and a very accurate, canon-compliant, wonderful study of their personalities. Thank you so much.

oh this is good! well written too, which is always a plus. i'll admit, i was a little disappointed at the end, all that build up to fall a little short, but it still was very enjoyable. nicely done.

I love this oneshot. I like how everything was beautifully described and detailed. Every emotion and feeling, you put them beautifully into words. Very touching story, gotta admit that. :)

Oh Man... Why couldnt the game have had your tranlastions, your scene at least! I mean come on, Sora was always, "Have you seen a guy named Riku". Its understandable this happens, best freinds do worry about eachother.

This was the most beautiful piece of fanfiction I have ever read. Words cannot express how undeniably happy I am to have found this story. Your son must be very lucky to have such a talented person like you for a mom. I am faving this.

i loved this story, i will have to read some of your other stuff, because this was indescribable.

Exquisite beyond the capacity of human language.

Wow. This was superb. Without a doubt, that was one of the highest quality fan-fictions I have ever read on this site. Your use of language is gripping. True craftmenship of a story. I absolutely love it.

I'm so glad I read this. THANK YOU so much for sharing. It was phenominal.

Wow this was so good! I don't think of ever read a story so well written, the detail and the wording was amazing! How did you do it? It was so cute I just loved it! The fluffiness was great! SoraxRiku have got to be my all tim favorite couple! Yes I'm difiantly making this story a fav, I loved it! Well until next time and I really hope to see more stories like this from you! Oh and I'm adding you on my author alert list!

-Riku-stalker

Wow. This is one of the best pieces of writing I have ever seen. You manage to describe what they'd be feeling so well, and still keep the story flowing smoothly. I hope you continue to write, and I'll keep a look out for your stuff. Good luck!

wow!
your writing is amazing!
and i love the fic
absolutely amazing

its nice and well-written. It's not the type of read where you want to abandon because its starting to become akward. Dedication was very sweet..

Your writing is outstanding--
I can actually . s e e . what`s
going on in this. ♥

Good work.