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| Rose1948 2007-11-12 ch 1,  | abuse::roflmao:: |
| wolf-in-hell 2006-11-17 ch 1, | abusedisturbing... |
| CHAOS!!!!!!! 2006-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseCool. how many reviews would you need to make this a 2 shot? |
| ChocolateMilk2 2006-09-19 ch 1, | abuseok... that was... different... |
| Angela Jewell 2006-09-15 ch 1, | abuseOMG! That was hilarious! I loved it so much, I couldn't stop laughing. I'm glad Ranma finally found a good purpose for the Spring of Drowned Girl... knowing his ability to stick his foot in his mouth though, I wouldn't be surprised if it's a short-lived marriage. I can picture it now: Ranma makes some off-hand comment to 'Teri' about how fat she's getting, and tells her she should cut down on the people eating for awhile--only to find himself as dessert instead. ;) |
| AscendedWarrior 2006-09-13 ch 1, | abuseUm... I don't know if there drugs your taking or should be taking but do something. Seriously now, this story was destubing on so many levels yet amussing at the same time, I don't think there is anything else to say... -AscendedWarrior |
| ranma hibiki 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abuse0_0 i find this strangely fascinating in a odd way. but you might want to work on the beggining some. i cant tell where its talking about ranma or were its talking about terri untill "The chicken teriyaki was standing in the doorway." then it became clear on who was who mrs. teriyaki saotome...why could i see her and ranma as the parent of poor souls like keitaro urashima (love hina), jupiter/mars/neptune (people change the sailorscouts names too much), or someone else whos life is equally full of chaos. |
| Wonderbee31 2006-09-11 ch 1, | abuseROTFL, This was funny, and just about a nice-sized bite of Ranma humor. Really enjoyed this, and thanks again for the laugh. |
| Howard Russell 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseMade me smile. Very cute. Somehow, it's the romance that really sells it for me. Quite amusing. Where were Nodoka and Nabiki in all of this? Assimilated or cheering from the sidelines? Concidering the Musk, I wonder what their kids will look like. |
| Baron Hausenpheffer 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseHaha! Very funny little ficlet. Who would have thought that the solution to Ranma's problems lay in his mortal enemy, Akane's cooking? LOL My only negative quip is that you seem to have a bit of a continuity error in the beginning: one minute Ranma is shoving the dreaded poultry dish down Akane's throat, and the next minute it's standing in the doorway. How? Other than that, great fic. You need to get writer's block more often! :) |
| Lockblade 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of those disturbing fics where you can't help but smile at the ending. Who thought that Terriyaki could do that... wait, my school cafeteria used to serve that. Explains why I haven't seen some of my friends in ages... :P |
| Bobboky 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abusescary |
| Ellen Kuhfeld 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI suppose I could say something about "this story eats it!" but that would be uncomfortably close to the literal truth... Ellen |
| Scooter 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseSick, man. Really sick. But highly enjoyable. |
| Lykii 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was hilarious! I loved it! |