Oh, wow.

Both of these were amazing! So much imagry and feeling were put into one simple sentence. And I myself am doing drabbles with some couples, but sentences...pure genius!

Your writing is excellent, so thats an added bonus. Excellent concept and idea here.

Oh, and any couple will be wonderful!

KAWAII!
Omg this is so kyute!
(and it was written on my birthday!)
Aw.
Its adorable!

very nice... though it makes me wonder how it would be to read an acatual story about them... keep up the good work

That was creative and interesting. There were a few grammar/spelling mistakes but overall a fun read. And a Yakari! Hoorah!

This was absolutely lovely...so well written and I just loved it.

Please, please, please do a Taichi/Mimi!! :)

Keep up the lovely work!

I love it! I love Yakari! I think it is so cool you could do so much with just a sentence. The whole thing tells such a great story!