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| stacie orico 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abusegood job I love knux and rouge stories and I read the hentei version I liked it better |
| DMOC 2007-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally good fic. I really liked it. One of my fav's. Also, if you ever feel like posting the "Hentai Version", I support it. Your knack for writing would make for a good lemon. Again, really good fic, despite the errors. |
| Mandapolia13 2006-11-05 ch 1, | abuseAbsoouletley luv it! Please make another one... For me? |
| Angelfaced DramaQueen 2006-09-15 ch 1, | abuseME: brilliant! loved it loved it! JADE; real sweet. ME: and kudos for sticking up for your style of writing-LMAO! JADE: yeah, she gets like that too at times-(when people spell her real name wrong) ME: it has TWO 'e''s Damit! and no 'i' or 'f' OR any Extra 'N'! DA! *screams in fustration* JADE: *cowers in the corner* |
| Knuxie'sgirl 2006-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseKitty,u write the best fics!Another thumbs-up! |
| Autumn Nocturne 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseYour story was pretty good, although you spelled 'purr' incorrectly, had a doubled word, spelt 'performing' wrong, and last but not least, you spelt 'to' as 'th'. Everyone makes mistakes, especially me, so I really don't care too much. I'm telling you this so that you can fix your mistakes in the near future.(I wish MY reviewers would say something other than 'good job! update soon!') You said that this was the 'non-hentai version'. So like, do Rouge and Knuckles just start screwing each other in the bushes in your hentai version? Weird, but that's how most lemons go anyway. Also, you said you've been writing for 5-6 years now, and have been using a 'Fiction Line Out'. I'd like to see that, since I'm writing a few fan fictions currently. You've convinced me that it truly helps. Feel free to send it to my e-mail, if you like. =] Other than that, this fiction had a remotely interesting plot line, which I somewhat enjoyed. Everything else on here lately has just been boring me to p i e c e s. I keep finding myself reading old fanfics. How sad is that? As a last comment, I think I'll go with a 'Well Done' |
| Atlantic-wolf 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseMe: KNUCKLES!!WHY'D YOU LEAVE POOR LIL ROUGY LIKE THAT!! Liz:They'll be together no matter what, didn't yuo read Me: yeah huh, I did but the ending kinda sad. I loved this story, it was pretty cool when Rouge kept knocking Knuckles off of his board and she had it all planned. Liz: she's very organised isn't she? Me: unlike you, yes she is. ANOTHER STORY OF YOUR'S THATS A NUMBER ONE HIT!! ^-^ |
| Wingless Rain 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseYou really need a spellchecker. Also, lyrics should be woven into the story, not posted on their own. |
| Keitou 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI...love you! OH EM GEE! I love this! I wanna read the real one but im a bit too young! or... lol jk |