 AngelKnightKyaro 8/23/09 . chapter 1Heh. That was amusing. |
 Kawaii Hana 6/21/09 . chapter 1And there i was, curious on what sort of fics my reviewers write... And i found this...
I'm glad found it... Spent the entire time bursting into fits of laughters from the humorous and unexpected points in ur story...
Good job... U should write more FF8 fics... But, no that I'm pressuring to do so you know...
My fave line:“Crap! Squall! Buddy! Pal! Do something!”
I keep going back to that part and LoL all over again... It's just hilarious to see Seifer begging Squall for help! And then throw Rai and Fuu in the mix... they make one funny trio...xD
I also didn't understand the meaning of the title from ur brief summary at first but i smiled in understanding when i got to the end...
I find it kinda funny, too... since earlier Squall mentioned about his father Laguna and by the end... Rinoa mentions something about being a "father" to those cactuars...
Sure hope Squall won't run away when the 'responsiblilty' really comes to being... "
I commend you for the great read! definitely one of my favorites now!
Ja ne!
KAWAII HANA |
 Exhile87 6/21/09 . chapter 1Absolutely hilarious! I enjoyed it a lot. The Cactuars attacking the DC was just the icing on the cake. Love that "wckluk" thing too! Cactuars and Tonberries have the best sounds in the game. P |
 DreamScene 6/11/09 . chapter 1This was so funny.
It's borderline crack and absolutely great. |
 Berlin's Brown Eyes 1/2/09 . chapter 1A cute and entertaining oneshot. (Fujin always has the best lines.) You should really publish something in the Zelda section. ;)
Berlin's Brown Eyes |
 Pied Flycatcher 5/15/08 . chapter 1Hehe. I like how you kept them in-character, although I can't quite imagine Squall dressing up as a cactuar. Irvine's comment about him being whipped was spot-on and very funny though. :P
The writing could do with some improvement in places though - it slips between past and present tense and there are a lot of run-on sentences. |
 AuraMistress 12/26/07 . chapter 1Hey, I never got around to reading this before but it's awesome. I really like the humour that you've incorportaed into it and it's written in a sophisticated style therefore making it a wonderful oneshot to read. Well done! -
P.S. You should write more FVI related Fanfic as you seem to have a talent for it. |
 MiKe2vIcIoUs 12/24/07 . chapter 1I enjoyed, reminded me of the Final Fantasy glory days... *sigh*
I like how you threw Irvine in there too. I liked it, pretty funny. |
 Netta Sloan 5/12/07 . chapter 1Great story! Absolutely perfect! |
 chrisVIII 3/24/07 . chapter 1lol, I like that story ! humor stories which are not absurd or plain no sens but actually funny and well written is difficult to find ! thanks :) |
 Jetflash 2/17/07 . chapter 1You know, that's exactly how I've come up with my two Final Fantasy Humor oneshots. Huh. |
 Ryanko 9/15/06 . chapter 1What an incredibly interesting story! I laughed! The concept behind it is way too cute. And the thought of Squall in a cactuar costume amuses me to no end. This is really a fun short story, you did a great job. I must admit my favorite part is where Rinoa hinted at Squall being a good father... and then he used the cactuar technique. I guess Rinoa will have to hunt him down now!
Again, great job. |
 Wolfdog Girl 9/12/06 . chapter 1 Hahaha. This story is funny! Great job! |
 Rosa Heartlily 9/12/06 . chapter 1LOL! That was really funny. Great fic. |
 MissSugarQuill 9/12/06 . chapter 1HAHAHAHA, that was cute. *pokes Cactaurs* Ive never actually fought one before, save the big giant one .. he was fun. Lol, poor Squall, getting bullied by everyone. And how the Cactaurs fell over to say goodbye was hilarious.
"I returned the gesture, falling flat on my face .. " |