This has been great so far but I need more! Please update soon!

Loved how 'famous' Clark is in this chapter!

And I think i want to cry because it's the last chapter posted. So uh.. hope there is more and SOON!

love the nightgown thing! And again with the poor Richard

loved Eduarado in this chap! Poor clark.

Great interaction with Lois and Superman. I hope he gets to find Richard soon..

i like how you aren't making Richard the 'bad guy'. It's very true to character and so is Clark's.

Another great chap! Poor Jason. I feel badly for him!

oh poor Richard! I hope Clark will save the day here...

I love the way you write Lois and Clark, i can hear them 'speaking' in my head when I read your dialogue. *heads to next chap*

I just started this fic and I'm loving it! Be prepared for reviews for probably every chapter..

Aw, Lois, what you don't know! I see we're getting closer to solving this mystery. More clues, need more clues...! Just please hold on a little longer, Richard. Just a little longer...! A chilling statement by Meliene (don't want to repeat it)! Thanks for updating.

Good, wish it was longer

Ee! I'm so glad you finally posted! I was starting to get worried.

I love that Clark is now getting really proactive on the search, I wonder if he really will find anything in London to go on?

Wow. Amazing chapter! Please update soon!

Wow, just marathon-ed all the chapters in one night and what a rollercoaster it's been. I'm really worried about Richard and also dying to know more about Underground (is it a little like Intergang?) and also about the first appearance of Kryptonite we've seen. You write Clark and Lois very well in particular - you have Clark bumbling but not overly so, enough to be in character with the movies.