aw...you wouldn't consider continuing, or writing a sequel, for sandry and/or daja and their respective partners?

Truly delightful - a beautiful pairing andyou have written the story with an easy flow. I loved it.

wow, I definitely didn't expect for it to end so soon. It seemed that there was going to be more but oh well, it was good nonetheless. yay for BriarxTris xD

I haven't been a big fan of any of the siblings pairing up, but your story is so well done, you just might have made a convert out of me! ;D Great job! Keep writing!! :D

Aw! That was the cutest story EVER! I love Briar and Tris as a couple, and was SO happy to find this story, there NEED to be more stories of them.

Anyways, FANTASTIC story!

~onesongglory23~

I like it! Congrats on your nomination!

I like this part especially: "The greasy man with the bald spot?" Tris demanded. "Daja, we need to talk more often."

That part is hilarious! : )

Fabulous story! I loved it! Keep up the great work!

Beautiful. Two of my fav chars in the perfect story!

I love this story. Normally I don't like the idea of Tris and Briar as a couple, but you just make it work.
thanks

ah, this was fantastic!
<3

Aw! That was an excellent ending to a great story. Thanks for writing it. x

Aww yay!I've been waiting for someone to write a good Tris and Briar story and here it is! I love it... It almost reads like Tamora's books. I wish it didn't end =(

your story is quite good and in like it
could u possibly write a sequel?

It was really good, you should definitely write more!

This was simply gorgeous - well written, in character, and incredibly sweet. A pleasure to read!