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Reviews for: The Light and the Darkness
Reaga
2006-11-12 . chapter 1
Do you have ANY intentions on updating this?
TwilightCharmedFaie
2006-09-18 . chapter 2
Sokai told me to come read your sequel to her story too - and so far I like it! Keep up the good work - and update soon! love, glPiItAer :)
Celestial Secrets
2006-09-11 . chapter 2
Very interesting. I'd like to learn more. Update soon please!
xaddictedx
2006-09-10 . chapter 1
Yay! a spin off!
AshK
2006-09-09 . chapter 2
Good chapter! I like it! Keep up the great work!

Sincerely,
AshK
AshK
2006-09-09 . chapter 1
Good start! I like it! Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
AshK
DayDreamer9
2006-09-09 . chapter 2
This is looking good so far, I wanna see more ^_^ And where are the other Guardians? How did they survive? And what's Will gonna do when she finds out her sis is alive? I eagerly await what'll happen next ^_^
Sokai (not signed in)
2006-09-09 . chapter 2
One more thing (I know, I'm such a nag ^_^). LoL

1, in the future, if you do those shared rpg A.N.'s like you did in chapter 1 -- er, the prologue -- can we negate sitara? cuz you might make her silly and..well..she's honestly not. lol

And 2, could you put a disclaimer at the top or w/e that says what you said at the bottom of your prologue? ^_^ THAT way, "everyone" shall travel to the original story and read it. ^_^

Mwa!
Sokai
2006-09-09 . chapter 2
I honestly didn't get to read this chapter when you'd sent it in e-mail to see what I thought before you posted it, but I will now, and I'm sure it's okay. ^_^

Only thing that I CAN see that I'm not to "thrilled" about are the names of Sita's foster folks...it's too..."common". Sorry, I got..."issues" with common names. The less common, the better, for me -- hence, Sita's name. LoL

But YEAH! As promised, I will fill you in more on Ares and crap to help you and Brit along with the rest of the chapters. ^_^

Mwa, you two! ^_~
Sokai
2006-09-09 . chapter 1
AH!! HOW super coolio-string-cheese is this, that you FINALLY went ahead and posted this, after I'd ONLY said a billion times that what I'd read was cool? ^_~

*Tackles both you and Brit* Congrats! Since YOU kick arse, separately, I'm sure this sequel will get a BILION reviews (it'd BETTER, dammit...got my girl, Sita, riding on the line, after all...LoL). ^_^

Now, shoo. Go read mine. LoL
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