this is a great fic. Remus is Sirius' girlfriend :P love that. anyway, update soon please. i want to see where this is going. it's very engaging. and Sirius is the best.

I. Laughed. My. **. Off. Want to know why? Meh, I'm telling you anyway. The gym class teacher? White skin man? He's a 'coach', not a couch. A couch is a sofa, those things you sit on to watch TV. Now, if you had a bit of decent author in you, you would have either a) known this already, because 'coach' and 'couch' are common English words (if English isn't your first language, by dear Merlin, that's no excuse for making a mistake like that), b) have a beta to read over what you've written, c) be unsure and look it up in a dictionary or d) I'd say read your reviews for feedback, but gah, your reviews say this is amazing, which it's not. It's got plenty of room for improvement, believe me.
I'm not normally this harsh, but I'm starting to get really sick of this kind of writing. Your story could be interesting, and I might have read it once upon a time to see if it got better, but I'm in a ** mood today. Please, for the love of this pairing and good fanfics, please! Either get a beta or reread your story yourself. Of course, you can disregard this completely and keep sucking. Your move.

The shooting was exciting, but you never gave closure about it, like mentioning that an article in the newspaper said they'd been arrested. Or did you do it, and I just missed it?

The Remus-on-acstasy was fun to read, and I love that Sirius didn't take advantage of him!

I understand why James is angry that Sirius didn't trust him enough to tell him about his preferences, but I think you should've waited until next chapter for the James-drama because Sirius and Remus just got together the previous day. It's too much at once.

Anyway, it's a good story overall. I wouldn't have read this far if it wasn't! Good luck with it :.)

amazing!

amazing, pls update soon ^^

CUTE...

oh! please update! ME LOVE! and chapter 11 was so cute. kudos for the great fic.

I hope you don't contract cancer.

this is great! I think it's true that most people generally enjoy fics that take place in the US less, but it's nice for me to be on familiar turf for once... yay for american R/S shippers! I can so easily place sirius and remus in los angeles... I've seen the city a few times.

Aw Remus is so cute when he's high! ^^

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I'm glad that you updated!
really like the chap,
I think I'd be kind of upset as james is, if my best friend keep such a secret from me, poor
I hope you'll be able to update soon.

Too short! *whines* But they're so so cute I can't really complain! XD M I'm not really angry... I know you'll fix James with your amazing authoress skillz! Because you're just great like that! Update soon! MEbbe? PLease?

ooh love the suspence (or however it is written) i´m not too worried about james though it will all clear up i hope and good job on eveything by the way

I love the list of "obnoxious coupley things". lol. This is a GREAT chapter! please update SOON!

Oh James , try and control your temper..

i just love how you write... it's so different... and young. i like how you made james blow up about two seconds after he was in denial... the truth just tends to come out when you see it... whether you want it to be true or not... excellent job my dear =]

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