Loved it. Nice and long and real. Love it!

cute story

This is a wonderful tag to the episode Sateda. You really have the character's voices down well. I can see this in my head as a real part of the show. The interaction between McKay and Ronon was wonderful! ^_^

This is an outstanding story. It brings out elements in Ronon and Rodney that we never see in the show.

Ronon's recovery from his Sateda experience is beautifully and honestly done.

I like the way you use the Athosian's accessibility as the setting and means to tell your story.

Great work!

Marianne

Wonderful! Enjoyed the interaction...however, I have to say that I too wished it had gone on just a bit longer..*grin*

meli

"“Lovely. Want to get out of the pool and come work now?” McKay crossed his arms, and stepped back as the two splashed their way to the edge and up the bank. “And put that thing away.”"

Loved it! Very nice character piece with Ronon and McKay :)

No no no no! How can you end that there? You have to show them finishing the dam, and Carson yelling at Ronon for pulling his stitches, and Elizabeth agreeing (or disagreeing) to rescue the other runners, and and and...MORE! PLEASE!

Yay! A McKay and Ronon story! So nicely done. Well written and nicely characterized.

Wonderfully, amazingly done! I was writing a post Sateda fic too, but I was blown away by how well you did yours! On my list of favs. So, so well done. I loved Jinto and Ronon's little interaction, and Ronon bursting out like that on McKay. You hardly see Ronon burst out like that, but I could totally imagine him doing that. Again, well done! I'll definitely be looking forward to your work in the future.

~thedummie2

I really enjoyed this story - an excellent and rare study of Ronon. In fact all your characterisations were good especially McKay. And all the little details such as Rodney's pants - I laughed out loud when I read Ronon's idea of packing.
A lovely Sateda tag.

That was a lovely story. Great Rodney - Ronon interaction. Ronon is such a great character, and you did a great job with his voice. Loved the scene with him and Jinto in the tent, and him finally letting go.

I loved it! It was extremely IC, and the plot, even though it wasn't very much of one, was good. Although I guess I could also argue that the plot was very huge, because it was all about dealing with things. Anyhoo... I really liked it. :D

Excellent story. Ronon is one of my favorite characters. Ta for bringing him into the light.

A nice Rodney-Ronon story. I like that it is set after Sateda.

I really liked this story. Good Rodney-Ronon interaction is rare. You characterize them all very well, especially Ronon.

"The mainland was fairly safe; he shouldn’t need more than four or five knives."

*snerk*