That was amazing. The separate sentences added to the heaviness and strange relationship between Michael and Sara; it's like each sentence doesn't make much sense, but they relate and work together in some way. Or...maybe not. I liked this anyway. Great job! E. Mentry

So sweet! *sniff* Why has this not got more reviews? I loved it! Especially the disconnectedness of each little paragraph.

Oh and this line "She doesn’t associate soft with prison or tattoos; that’s why she gets a jolt each time her hands brush the skin of Michael’s arm."

*melts*

Well done! I hope to read some more of your stuff.

i thought that was one of the most original pieces of fic that i hav ever read, not the norm but thats what made it so much better...loved every bit of it, your're a real talent...