Haha random name im not sayin "boo".but any ways...MORE KIGO! -evil eyes- >:(

lol i loved the huge lung thingy! Everythings possible for a Possible

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hm interesting.

Wierd, but interesting. I've definately never seen this plot line in a Kigo fic before, should be quite interesting and entertaining. I look forward to your next update.

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Nice job. Personally, I don't see the point of this "KiGo" thing, but eh... it's a good story so far. Keep going!

O.o That would be *extrememly* confusing if I were Kim X_X;

Keep writing, though =)

Sorry, I just don't buy any of it. First you have the Drs mad at each other, to the point that MrDrP gives up driving to make a point. MrsDrP takes her seat belt off? All of this is out of character.

Were Dr D and Shego to arrive anywhere there would be law enforcement, they would be arrested on the spot.

Will or no Will, the state would not turn children over to felons/fugitives. To even consider this turn of events as plausible, we's have to assume Kim's parents were either insane or hated their kids.

To have even a remote chance of bringing off this story, there needs to be lots of back story leading up to this event.

Go read "Ron Stoppable, Ultimate Monkey Master," by Quis Custodiet. Quis spent 80 words setting up his plot, so to be able to explain a Ron/Shego relationship.

Don't be afraid to spend time and words to get your point across, if the writing is good, readers will stay with you to the end.

Yes, Rufus ran away, but to where? I'm wondering about that part. Anyway, I'm guessing that Jim and Tim didn't forget Drakken, they just purposefully left him. Although, that was a really nice bit where Shego found herself comforting Kim. And just because Kim isn't allowed to see Ron, it doesn't mean she can't make a phone call, right? And Ron SHOULD realize that Kim'd likely need some time before she could pull herself together. But, you have set things up nicely for Ron and Monique to start going out. Anyway, I look forward to what you've got next. ^_^

I don't expect Kim end up staying as weak as she has been in this chapter. That isn't to say that the apparent weakness here didn't make sense, after all she's lost both her parents recently and found out that Drakken has guardianship of she and her brothers.

As far as Kim doing what Drakken says "...because that's what your parents wanted you to do," I can't see that flying very far for a few reasons: A) she's been raised by her parents well enough to know that they would want her to stop any of Drakken's take over the world plots; B) she probably realises that if Drakken does everything he can to enforce the "You can't do anything to stop me from taking over the world" rule she could declare him an unfit guardian, get herself emancipated, and probably get her brothers better living conditions.

Well, first off, if Kim really wants to foil Drakken's plans, she could always talk to her friends about when he's going to do something; after all, he can forbid things all he wants, but he can't do very much to enforce it. Since even though he is her legal guardian, there still are limits to what he can do. And second, I'd have at least thought that Kim would have expected to go with her uncle. But that's just me.

Lookin' pretty good so far. And if you really want to make this Kigo, then you're off to a good start. Since, they'd just need time to get used to each other. One suggestion I have is that you could have Shego wake up at night to hear Kim crying and be unable to get back to sleep, so after listening to the crying for several minutes, Shego gets up and tries to comfort Kim. That would certainly be a way for this to turn to being a Kigo fic.

And if you're interested, I could let you know of a site that's dedicated to the Kigo pairing. Just if you're intersted. -_^

Hey! Happy to see an update! This chapter, in my opinion, was better than the last(and that was good)And its progressing well. Cant wait to see what is next!

i think the "she went all emo" was a really good shego line! i like where the story is going. i think shego should be killed with guilt though. i think it's cute when shego feels so bad she does something nice. btw rinacats art got me into kigo to. i think he stuff is so cute. KIGO 4 EVA!

dude you have a sweet plot going and i think you should make this a drama romance and put kigo in it. maybe a little ron/mon in it. but i think kigo is deff the way to go in this fic. honestly i think the plot is good and i see this story's potential. keep up the good work. i hope you consider my suggestions.