it was so beautiful, i love it!

Geez...!
;w; That's pretty good!

Aw the end was sweetand rpmantic

sasuke and sakura 4 ever

Wow. That was a kinda cute ending? I still loved it though.

though written really well, there's just a problem.
the groin is actually a muscle on the inside of your leg.. not *ahem* the boy's male organ.
just thought i'd help out, incase anyone else thinks he used his leg... y'know..
yeah.. groin = muscle of your thigh. everyone has a groin.
hope it's helpful.
also, greatly written story. i enjoyed the beginning most.

this is so cute! I really like this story! you've really written what could happen really well.

so sad

it does have potential.my respects to you

good

that was so cute!!

wow!this is a beautiful fic!

it's so cute i love it so much!

Kawaii! Loved how you put "Onyx clashed with emerald." Update soon. You're an awsome writer!! - XTemariXNaraX :)

dizzy*
soo god...flushes*

awesome! i loved every word and it was so nice how you were able to smoothly make the transition from Sakura's narration to Sasuke's.