great story! i really liked it, love that you keep the characters in characters.. if you know what i mean.

and don't worry Heather, i always leave a review for the stories i read. ;)

i think that a lot of pepole read your stories, but some of them do not leave a review, i am not going to talk for them but its true.

but once again i cant get it out of my head! its so cool to read your stories!! :D

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chris

the first chapter here really got my attention, and kinda spooky.
i like it, lets read the rest, shall we? ;)

Poor Thomas!

Wow...

This was just a downright creepy tale and you kept me hooked because you know exactly how to use the right words and terminology to describe the injuries.

It's amazing to see someone use the right words and terminology in fic! :) I love the detail you take the time to talk about because then I can follow along going, "I know what they're talking about!" *g*

Good job - you really kept me on the edge of my seat with this one.

Very awesome story! I love your style and the imagery you used to paint the action and emotions! And, Ive pretty much finished reading all but one of your fics; i have to thank you so much for giving my medical terminology class relevance! I've never had to use it so much... ever...cept on tests of course =P

Thanks again! I love your stories!

wow...thats really it but...wow. I REALLY enjoyed it. especially the disoriented from carson's point of view parts

I love the many little character details you added to this chapter - Teyla's hard life causing her to be concerned about the cost of the MALP, Shep & Rodney snarking at each other, Ronon's "Little Man" comment to Rodney, Rodney's bunching shorts and his concern that Teyla may have noticed, Carson's concern about his wandering mind and wryly wishing that his body could wander with it back to Atlantis, Carson's delusion about seeing the Team with him in the tree, etc.

Aaw! The end bit was really awesome. So wonderfully friendshippy!

I really liked this fic. In some places it got a tad bit boring, especially the ninth chapter. But it never got really boring or anything, and all it really caused me to do was skip over a few paragraphs here and there.

The first chapter was so awesomely action packed and attention-grabbing that I became very very happy.

Good job. :D

Good team moments here and it's always good to see Zelenka. Including mention of other SGA teams is a nice touch. It's also good to hear about Carson dealing with the lingering effects of being Michael's captive.

I love how you're keeping the ominous tone high and the scene where the team realized just how bad it was for the SGA-4 team and Carson was chilling.

Excellent story with a fantastic ending. Nice one!

Nice story. Love the ramblings of a drugged Beckett (especially the phospholipid membrane comment).

Wonderful! You come up with such wonderful whumping opportunities for Carson, and the payoff's always great. I'm off to read your new one, and hope it's not the same idea I had. :)

yay!
that was a happy ending!
im glad there wasnt a whole lot of physcological stuff.
that always makes stories run on forever and i lose interest.
YAY!
ENCORE!!

Awe, sweet ending.

Subtle. Very subtle! LOL!

I love that the team can break through to Beckett so easily, that he sees them while everyone else, including Morrison as he manipulates his foot, are sort of shadow figures. Teyla in particular I love here. And Ronon cracks me up! He's doing so much better than the other two boys!

Sweet scene. Very sweet.

And don't think I didn't spot those references! So wicked!