Well, I'm not going to lie. I got a little uninterested at a few points. But it was okay, just slow.

That was so amazing. The theme went perfect with Ronon and how you used running with everyone of them made it simply fantastic. Great work.

Neko 3

This story was really well done. The team dynamics were great. You took a character that doesn't get much attention and really fleshed out his character. Nice job.

Ronon centric is always a good thing. Very nice. I like the way you portray our favorite runner. Looking forward to more from you.

What a wonderful story. I have only just begun watching SGA, and your character study of Ronron is so very skilfully done! (just as you do with pretty much everyone in your BSG stories).

I loved the various analogies, especially the 'running' one, and your subtle hints towards John and Rodney are very well done.

Thank you for a real treat to read! :)

Lovely- I enjoyed this.

WOW! I love Ronon's character, and you painted him PERFECTLY. Honestly, I love this fic. Very, VERY good job, will look for more by you. :D

Wonderfully written. Beautiful!

thedummie2

Oh this was nice. Excellent character insight. I like the way you hinted at the Sheppard/McKay relationship, confirmed it even, without giving in to the temptation to go into detail. Well done!

great fic!