Good to read that the story has a good end, despite Jim, Vince and Kate deads.

You did a great job with this fanfic Claire :) I loved it :)

Congrats on the story. Amy's secret service name of "Virtue" fits her perfectly. I loved that Kelly named her daughter "Kate."

Hey Great job with this story. Congratulations for finishing.I hope you keep writing stories because I really enjoy them.

Another magnificant story!!Love it!!
-Aidyn

This was an exciting chapter if not brutal. Great writing though hope you update soon i'm eager to know what is going to happen.

"She very quickly threw one of the guns to the agent and, in a very quick moment, the two terrorists were dead." - YES! Quick thinking on Mac's part, just like Charly Baltimore. I hope she has more moments like this.

"Jim: if you are staying, madam, then I’m staying too… I’ll help you find the family…" - Aww, he's so great. I guess she'll need his manpower in the future.

I loved this: "Amy saw her and was about to shout, but Mac did their special “lips locked” sign and the girl understood that she had to stay silent."

"he terrorist shot at Jim, who fell to the floor as dead as the two terrorists." NO! So much for Team America (Mac & Jim).

"Mac took her wedding ring off and handed it to her oldest daughter; she then took off her necklace and gave it to Amy." - AW.

Please update soon - this is such an exciting story, and I can't wait to see what happens. I felt so sorry for Becca though.

That was brutal. Poor Vince, Kate, and Becca... and Amy, too. Mac and Rod will go ballistic when they learn what the terrorists did to Kate and the girls. Update soon!

Poor Kate, she is one of my favorite characters!
I feel so sorry for Vince and Gilda!

Poor Vince and poor Kate! Can you revive them? :)

I loved the conversation between Mac and the White House Operator.

Keep writing, please!!


Anna :)

I really like the way in which this story has been started can't wait to read more!

You make a good point about negotiating with terrorists vs. saving one family and a small number of others on that plane. Which carries more weight? Which is more important? I wonder if Nathan will sabotage this in the future in any way.

This story has a lot of potential. Chapter 2 was brutal, made me cringe. Chapter 3 was great--short but real. Keep up the good work.

I love how all the Secret Service agents got killed right away!

"Did he really think that she would simply leave the Air Force One and let everybody on board (including her family) die?.
“I don’t think so”, muttered Mac to her self." - This is so Charly Baltimore!

Aww, it was so sad when they took Horace and Rod away.

But I'm so mean that I thought this was funny: "Terrorist: You better shut up little girl or I will blow your brains out…"

As I'm reading this I'm really wondering if they'll kill the family.

I can't wait to read the rest of this. You're great with the suspense, and I think it helps that I have never seen "Air Force 1."

Well... honey, you already know what I think... but, what the hell, is always nice to get reviews so I'll write one for you:

I really like the idea... it has potential to have very dramatic and intence moments.
and I'm already enjoying it so much
I'm so glad that you come up with doing this.
And I'm so glad that you took my advice and made it a series...

Lara

OMFG! Awesome! Keep it up! I hope I don't know the ending already! Anyway, I luv it! Please don't vote Mac off of Air Force One Island (Commander In Chief Surivier Style! LOL) Great Job!

xoxo Mac xoxo