oh jeez, I'm sad it's complete, I really enjoyed this because the ending on Pt. Gate really didn't satisfy me. Thank you!

PS, you do Barty (couldn't help myself) really well, right down to the footnotes.

aw
this was so cute!
i loved bart's chaper. the footnotes were def. somethig he'd say.
keep writing

~S4E

i'm interested in how this is going to turn out!! keep it going!!

ur story rocks! its almost as though jonathan stroud is writin! u rock!

What a wonderful epilogue! Couldn't have written it better. Okay, maybe I could've but I didn't so, I hope you update! whee, evil Bart!

I can definitely see John Mandrake dieing completely here. Death to Mandrake! Long live Nathanial!

Update, pretty please? This is good!

i love this book. i also think that Nathaniel shouldn't have died. i like your fanfic. good job

Mwahahaha you must update! And I love that you put in the footnotes like in the book!

Please update more! You write very well in character, but it was very irksome reading 'Nathanial' instead of 'Nathaniel.' IN further chapters you should change this

Great job. I really like the fact that Nathaniel is still alive. Really like that fact. Really do.

I LOVE IT! it's so well written, it seems like it could really be the last two chapters. I'd love it if you did a fourth book, based on what you have written here. it would be amazing :)

I really like what you've done here. It's really funny! I also like the take on everyone's personality...you make them all interesting and funny. Good job! Please update soon!


Btw, Happy Holidays!

not bad. make sure to write more.

really nice story! please continue. although, could you please spell out the names instead of just writing Ms P? hahax!! cant wait!! xD

please continue!