feeling guilty yet? i'd love to see what happens next (i can totally see remus as a daddy figure to a cute little baby, he's just so great a character--whaah! i want him for christmas!)

anyhoo, hope you still have some more lurking about on your hard drive somewhere. i'd love to see where this one's going!

I apologize in advance; I was raised by an English teacher.
there/they're/their...
there, as in "I found it over there" (location)
their, "He's their baby." possessive
they're, they + are, "They're going somewhere"

Now that I've got that over with, I really like your story, I'm greatly enjoying reading it.

I just had to read this story again--its too good to pass up and wow, what a situation for everyone to get around and such. amazing story, and very different.

i love lupin! and hermione's very believeable in this story--hope you can keep going on it, dust off your hard drive or notebooks or whatever. you've left it at too good a point at the moment.

keep it up! i'd love to see what'll happen next for everyone!

Wow i like this story. Are you gonna keep at? I think you should because its too great a story to leave unfinished. Please update it soon!

Hey great story and plot... you are a wonderful writer and amazing ideas.. my only advice is to get a beta to proof read your chapter...

oh crap! what a place to stop this story. i sure hope you've got more lurking in your hard drive or your brain, because this is an interesting story. i like the idea of lupin as an expecting daddy figure--i do think he'd be a lot like this in helping out a woman with this issue.

wow--great stuff. please keep it up! i know its been some time, but its too great to leave off. i just wonder what's gonna happen next (cliffie of all time--yikes!)

keep it up! this is a great story.

I would have to say, of all the authors I've read, you have probably the most accurate depiction of what Hermione's parents were like. I mean, the girl spent vast portions of her summers and some Christmases with friends instead of family.

I love it.
You HAVE to update soon.
(aka NOW)

I think that it is fantastic that Remus, Sirius, and Severus (due to Dumbledore's insistance) came to help Hermione to pack her things for her move.

I wonder why it is that Hermione hasn't informed Severus of her taking Remus up on his offer for a place to stay.

Aww, it is so sweet that Hermione feels comfortable enough with Remus to place his hand on her belly while talking about the baby, and snuggle into his shoulder due to feeling sleepy.

Well done!

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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

1) 'After packing and repacking to ["to" should be "the"] box that Sirius had attempted to pack ...'

2) 'She said standing up and wiping of ["of" should be "off"] her jeans.'

3) 'She had never realized just how dirty her floors were until she had to set ["set" should be "sit"] on them for long periods of time.'

4) '“Severus you should start with those books.[You forgot to insert the closing quotation mark after the period.]'

5) 'Hermione said looking at the many boxes pilled [] up around her.'

*::tears in eyes::*
The letter from Remus is so sweet! I swear it sounds very much like a declaration of devotion and love--lucky, lucky girl!

I like how her cheeks flushed, and it took her a moment to remove her hand from his bare chest. *SMIRK* *LEER* *WEG*
;~D

Well done.

:D

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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

1) '"I know your ["your" should be "you're"] upset with the whole situation right now, ..."'

2) '"... but because pregnancy’s ["pregnancy’s" should be "pregnancies"] aren’t that easy."'

3) '... it took her a moment more then ["then" should be "than"] needed to remove her hand.'

Oh my gosh, Remus helping Hermione while she was ill in the bathroom is a giant neon sign that says that he cares for her, and not to let this man out of her clutches.
;~D

Great story so far--keep up the good work!

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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

1) '... she made her way back to the table that she had been setting ["setting" should be "sitting"] at with Severus.'

2) '... they weren’t friends but they [You forgot to insert the word "were".] much more pleasant towards each other then ["then" should be "than"] anyone ever thought they could be.'

I like Hermione taking some evil pleasure in getting Sirius flustered because it was fun to watch, and then blame it on her fluxuating hormones--wicked girl! LOL I love it!
:D

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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

1) 'And he wouldn’t stop bringing [You forgot to insert the word "it".] up until he got answers.'

2) 'She stopped dead in her tracks when she saw Sirius setting ["setting" should be "sitting"] at the kitchen table.'

3) '... he suddenly realized why Remus had been trying to no ["no" should be "not"] so gently escort him out.'

4) '... obviously have ["have" should be "having"] heard there ["there" should be "their"] conversation.'

5) 'Hermione mumbled slowly setting ["setting" should be "sitting"] down on the chair next to Sirius.'

6) 'She said more to herself then ["then" should be "than"] them.'

Remus is such a sweetheart to have given Hermione the time to spill her sorrows and offer a cup of tea, a shoulder to cry on, and a bed for the night. He is a definite "keeper".
:D

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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

1) 'She knocked softly, not wanting to disturb his ["his" should be "him"] if he was already sleeping.'

2) '“To be honest I didn’t really didn’t [One TOO many "didn't"s in the sentence. I'm not sure which way you were trying to go with it... ("... I didn't really know ..." OR "... I really didn't know ...").] know where else to go.”'

3) 'He said placing [You forgot to insert the word "a".] hand over hers, ...'

4) '“... What is important it ["it" should be "is"] you. ...”'

5) '“Oh no Remus, I’ve already imposed on you enough as it [You forgot to insert the word "is".]. ...”'

6) '... that thing’s ["thing’s" should be "things"] would be okay.'

7) 'And knowing that she had a ["a" should be "at"] least stopped crying and was okay until morning, ...'

Oh my gosh, Bill you naughty boy--Lucky girl!
;~D

Bummer about Hermione's reaction to the news.

Good first chapter!

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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

1) 'She had been dancing with Percy, who was talking a mile at ["at" should be "a"] a minute, ...'

2) 'The party slowly began to die down and they said there ["there" should be "their"] goodbyes.'

3) '... they didn’t want to oppose ["oppose" should be "impose"] on the Weasley’s, ...'

4) 'He made the first move, thinking that she’s ["she’s" should be "she’d"] pull away.'

5) '... the guy that everyone else thought was perfect but all she could find was ["was" should be "were"] flaws.'

6) 'She never explained or gave her ["her" should be "him"] any details but he somehow seemed to understand.'

7) '... offering for her to take a few more weeks off then ["then" should be "than"] she suggested, ...'

8) 'But Dumbledore always did seem to know more then ["then" should be "than"] anyone else, ...'

9) 'She could see the millions of unasked questions written all over there ["there" should be "their"] faces.'

10) 'There ["There" should be "Their"] eyes held a look of disappointment that forced her to have to look away.'

11) '... her telling them that as of now they would be lucky if they ever got to see there ["there" should be "their"] grandchild.'

12) 'They wouldn’t have any better idea of what to do then ["then" should be "than"] her.'

13) 'He might be able to offer her more then ["then" should be "than"] an unsure smile and false promises.'

I know that you haven't updated this story in over a year, but I just wanted you to know that I love this story.

I love the relationship between Remus and Hermione, and hope they would just realize they love each other.

I hope that you decide to update the story. I am putting it on alert just in case.