its great i love how u added details in it

I can really dig it. I know what it's like to be the unfulfilled lover and just want to be everything to the other person, but then you realize that they're just sucking the life out of you.

I feel for Candice and I'm not sure what Carlito's deal is, but he needs to get over himself. Because Jeff's looking might good down there at that pool.

Great job. I'd love to see a sequel. You have a lot of stories that you don't finish, huh? It's not fair, you get me all involved with their lives and then you leave me hanging. :-(

Shanny

this fic = fantastic

I CAN'T BELIEVE NO ONE HAS REVIEWED THIS! has gone to hell when it comes to reviews. remember when we'd get like, 8 reviews for a one shot? what haappend? ** idiots. stupid fangirls...