Lovely! It's so sweet and so perfectly Hank!

Wow that was brilliant i really really loved this and wish that it could have turned out better for Rebecca after all Trish is a cow who spits poor ol Hank out like used garbage!
Anyway this was really very good, you wrote this with tremendous skill and clarity, you could feel everything the characters felt which is a refreshing change.
Anyway great job!
*Ellie*

All right! I've read too many stories where the fanfictional character just whines repeatedly after getting rejected my the main character, so this was a really welcome change. Great work, Phil! Reading these stories are fun!

Hey Mr. Sinister.. have I got some Genes for you! Yer ol' pal, The Bud.