That's great. I've never thought of Sabine, nor her inner ambitions in such a manner. Great job!

Very good. I can see it perfectly. This is what she is thinking when she's looking in the mirror right before she sings "One Day I'll Fly Away":) Very, very good capture of character.

"I know what smile to give Toulouse's newest protege to both make Toulouse happy and tell whatever adorable gutter rat he's dragged in that he's got no chance with me."

Perfect. Just perfect. Beautifully sums up the complexities of the relationship between Satine and Toulouse, how they are each manipulative in their own way. And-"adorable gutter rat"-I wish to god I had written that (*snaps pencil in two*).

Nice.

*Very* impressive!

I love it... quite deep, very well written.

lmao at ivy's review of your fic. but seriously, very deep and you captured it pretty well. am i correct in guessing that this took place before she met christian?

saicho_18 : slytherin -

*quietly stares in awe* wonderful

When will I begin to live again?

Well considering she's dead I doubt any time soon, lol.

Seriously great reflections, hope you write more.

Ivy

I like it. Makes sense to me.

Very true to Satine's character, IMO! Très bon!

Wow. Deep. Veddy veddy good.

Wow...this was really, really good. You've captured Satine's personality perfectly.

Short and to the point. I like it. This is probably the first fic I've seen told from Satine's POV. Very creative.:D

Lovely...

That was beautiful!