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Reviews for: The River of Night's Dreaming
sociopathic dreams 6/27/11 . chapter 1
I usually don't like this pairing, but you've done it beautifully.

*clapclap*
ncfan 8/5/10 . chapter 1
Okay, Nanao's report provides for a fascinating mood whiplash; it's incredibly funny. I like this take on Nanao; it's so different from the average author's take on Shunsui x Nanao.
Mina Rain 5/30/09 . chapter 1
OMG this was so painfully wonderful T_T

I loved it very much. Been through the same predicament myself, so thank you for expressing it so well in words.
Yukino-chan 9/24/08 . chapter 1
its great!
Pyromaniac-Girl 4/2/08 . chapter 1
That was a cool fic.

I like the way that you had the report in different colours, it was interesting to read, I always wondered what the shinigami's paperwork was all about.

Have a good day!
Selonianth 3/28/08 . chapter 1
DO IT DO IT DO IT
DarthAmmonite 7/3/07 . chapter 1
This was excellent!
Dark Duchess and Shadow Queen 5/27/07 . chapter 1
hecka sweet. the end was seriously 'aw'-inspiring.
Lawlz 4/14/07 . chapter 1
"She was just . . . discreet." - I loved that line the most. :]
Jedi Boadicea 9/30/06 . chapter 1
This was just wonderful. You capture Nanao so well. :)

This piece had a fantastic flow to it. The general narrative wove around the excerpts of report and fantasy smoothly and with a great lyrical sort of rhythm - a great device.

The report excerpts? Hilarious. :) Probably my favorite part of the whole story, actually.

And somehow Nanao's fantasizing so romantically like this feels totally appropriate to her outwardly stoic character. I like how you managed to portray that even romantic inner fantasies don't change the fundamental truth of her stoic nature, and that both can co-exist in the same person.

I have to confess that I don't see Ukitake/Shunsui at all, but this piece is one of those examples of how really good writing can make anything fun, no matter your inclinations. :)
alliedoll 9/26/06 . chapter 1
very in character. she would most definitely daydream like a romance novel.
Mandachan77 9/24/06 . chapter 1
Oh! this was so lovely! I love the way you had her multitasking. It just felt like Nanao the whole way through. I'd love to hear more Nanao from you.
Silindro 9/20/06 . chapter 1
The whole setup of that one was done very well. The report added something to the story.
Inari 9/11/06 . chapter 1
*claps* That was so clever with the multi-tasking Nanao. Nicely done!
Riana1 9/11/06 . chapter 1
It feels like Ise.

You have a gift for getting into a character's skin.
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