 sociopathic dreams 6/27/11 . chapter 1I usually don't like this pairing, but you've done it beautifully.
*clapclap* |
 ncfan 8/5/10 . chapter 1Okay, Nanao's report provides for a fascinating mood whiplash; it's incredibly funny. I like this take on Nanao; it's so different from the average author's take on Shunsui x Nanao. |
 Mina Rain 5/30/09 . chapter 1OMG this was so painfully wonderful T_T
I loved it very much. Been through the same predicament myself, so thank you for expressing it so well in words. |
 Yukino-chan 9/24/08 . chapter 1 its great! |
 Pyromaniac-Girl 4/2/08 . chapter 1That was a cool fic.
I like the way that you had the report in different colours, it was interesting to read, I always wondered what the shinigami's paperwork was all about.
Have a good day! |
 Selonianth 3/28/08 . chapter 1DO IT DO IT DO IT |
 DarthAmmonite 7/3/07 . chapter 1This was excellent! |
 Dark Duchess and Shadow Queen 5/27/07 . chapter 1hecka sweet. the end was seriously 'aw'-inspiring. |
 Lawlz 4/14/07 . chapter 1"She was just . . . discreet." - I loved that line the most. :] |
 Jedi Boadicea 9/30/06 . chapter 1This was just wonderful. You capture Nanao so well. :)
This piece had a fantastic flow to it. The general narrative wove around the excerpts of report and fantasy smoothly and with a great lyrical sort of rhythm - a great device.
The report excerpts? Hilarious. :) Probably my favorite part of the whole story, actually.
And somehow Nanao's fantasizing so romantically like this feels totally appropriate to her outwardly stoic character. I like how you managed to portray that even romantic inner fantasies don't change the fundamental truth of her stoic nature, and that both can co-exist in the same person.
I have to confess that I don't see Ukitake/Shunsui at all, but this piece is one of those examples of how really good writing can make anything fun, no matter your inclinations. :) |
 alliedoll 9/26/06 . chapter 1very in character. she would most definitely daydream like a romance novel. |
 Mandachan77 9/24/06 . chapter 1Oh! this was so lovely! I love the way you had her multitasking. It just felt like Nanao the whole way through. I'd love to hear more Nanao from you. |
 Silindro 9/20/06 . chapter 1The whole setup of that one was done very well. The report added something to the story. |
 Inari 9/11/06 . chapter 1 *claps* That was so clever with the multi-tasking Nanao. Nicely done! |
 Riana1 9/11/06 . chapter 1It feels like Ise.
You have a gift for getting into a character's skin. |