Very nice story. I also love ErikaxInnes! ^^

And are you ever going to update?

Yay! This is my fave couple! You are officially a god in my book. And into fave stories it goes...

A good fic coming along.

Could there be a Ephraim&Tana pairing as well. May i also ask for Marisa&Colm, Lute&Ross and Franz&Amelia? I never see those, except Franz&Amelia. =[

I agree with you on Eirika&Innes pairing, i love the pairing alot.
Happy that you like it too. :D

I hope you continue this fic!!

-Ayame

Wow, you're a pretty god writer. This is good, although this chapter was kind of...cut off. But this is good, please update soon.

yay! this has got to be my favourite pairing too!
brilliant story, by the way.
you simply MUST continue this!
please please please please please?!

I like this story, I hope u update soon. InnesxEirika is a great pairing!

i really liked your story. i think if u make sure you keep everyone in character (not that anyone was out of character, just a warning) your fic will be awesome. you should tell the fic from innes's point of view sometimes too if u want just to make things extra interesting and give people different perspectives of the situation. keep up the good work.

Three Cheers for this pairing!

Yay InnesxErika. Yay for you taking all my favourite units on this story (Lute, Artur, Franz, Amelia, Tana and Vanessa)

Watch out for typos, thats my only wee critisism.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

oh i love this innes and eirika is my fave :d please update hk

YES i've been waiting for one of these ( Eirika/Innes ), this is my favorite couple in FF8. but it took me a while to get the conversations -.-". oh well i hope that u update soon ^.^

Oh...an Eirika x Innes? I don't think I've ever read this pairing before...so far you are doing pretty good. I don't see a ton of flaws, but there are a few things I'd like to point out that could be improved.

Every once in a while, I noticed that you had some small-ish, choppy sentences...not too bad, but enough to capture my attention. A few could have been combined with a previous sentences, I believe...Try to work on description (enviroment, characters, ect), which will add more depth to your sentences as well as your story. ^-^ And of course there were a few minor flaws, a typo or so...nothing big.

Overall, you are doing well so far! Try to make some improvements in the mean time, and I'm sure you can produce some awesome fics! The only way to get better is to keep writing...Good luck with this story!