Umm...Well. I don't think this was an appropriate topic to use for such a story, but...If they can make movies out of it, then you can make a story. I thought it was..overwhelming. Though, I don't really like how you portrayed Cagalli. The Southern accent just doesn't seem to fit her in my book. Other than that, I thought this was well written.

Oh my...

Now I feel like I just barely missed getting killed in 9/11, the story was so real. You are an excellent writer. You have brought people into that tragic day, and showed them what it was like to be in the WTC on 9/11. Thank you.

I loved it so much. It reminds me alot of that day. I cant wait to read the rest of the story. Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon. Cant wait to read the rest of it. Great Job on the first chapter. I think its a great story.

Beautiful and pretty sad. You did a really good job with this story. I don't know what else I can say about it. Thanks. Take care.

wow

u should continue the story and it really good moved me in tears

i liked it very much except for cagalli's acsent

Well, you wanted me to review, so here I am. I haven't ever seen Gundam Seed, so as to who the characters are in their own world, I have not a clue, but it didn't really matter. You did a wonderful job with capturing the emotions. The terror, the sadness, the despair, the pain, the panic, etc. A very hard subject to write about, but I think you did a good job with it. I'm glad Zelda loves me!! YAY!

Pretty good...hope you write more

i can't really put it in words, but this very story of yours made me feel as if i was at the scene myself. Nearly cried after reading it...^^'', anyway, one word- brilliant

Even though using this story really wasn't the best idea, I must say that you did a great job telling it! You captured all the pain and feelings of the true event! I do hope this story will be accepted by others!