|Reviews for The Zaibatsu Project|
| Illusions of Dreaming 1/29/13 . chapter 9
oh god. this is amazing.
It's attention grabbing and I couldn't stop reading ever since I laid eyes on the first line.
It's such an amazing plot, so original as well!
I hope you do come back and update this FF for it's Ah-ma-zing
xD if not oh well, I'll just have to eat up the cliff hanger and be satisfied with your awesome plot skills
this is amazing.
| Hitori15 1/12/13 . chapter 9
| Yorushike 11/21/12 . chapter 9
I really like this story. You manage to keep the story exciting in every chapter and bring in a lot of new events and parts to the story line, without making it rushed. The characters feel very real and it's easy to come to love them.
Just two things: Are we going to get some Hajime Saito action? Every other major character has been involved in some way, except Saito.
The second: I know it is always difficult to describe the universe you are writing in without losing theflow of the story, but maybe tr to explain it just a little bit more? I never took the time to look into Cyberpunk, so perhabsed I am having a bit of a problem because of that? I got that the people are conected to the net by a chip in their hand or a machine like Kaoru. They than enter the virtual world, ok so far, so good. But when they are hurt and have a chip implanted, what happens? If it isn't deadly. Can they always log out? Do they actually write programs like in the real world and the battles are just visuals for that, or are the fights like real battles and there is actually a real sword fight going on,...? What about the other companies? Where are they in all of this?
I hope you will update soon on you livejournal account (I don't have an account there, so I am writing the comment on fanfic, even though I read the story on livejournal :))
| Anonymous Reviewer-T 11/16/12 . chapter 9
This is really interesting! _ Please keep up the good work! Hope to see more!
And I really loved the small bits of humour sprinkled throughout. ;)
Please update soon!
| please 12/31/11 . chapter 9
New year. In my room wishing you continue this story.
This story is masterpiece.
| sing-to-the-moon 11/25/11 . chapter 9
i read this and i love it. -
| Akira Setsuka 7/3/11 . chapter 9
Ehhh. And I was getting hooked to this. Are you gonna update anytime soon? :
| Jay 6/13/11 . chapter 9
This story...! It's so captivating! Gah! I just love the sci-fi influence and the complicated futuristic world So wonderful!
I can't wait until you update :D
| pennamelsjsets 4/21/11 . chapter 9
I've been following your stories for several years now. Very good! This story is just so wonderful- I was hooked after the first chapters! I can't wait to see where you go with this!
I can't wait to see Kenshin's plans to stop the experimentation and refuse to help Zaibatsu!
Once again congratuloations on creating such an original story, with great writing, great action and story development.
I am waiting, eternally hopeful for your next chapters!
| ilyena damodred 3/14/11 . chapter 9
Love it. Why is it abandoned?
| Azhwi 2/7/11 . chapter 9
Interesting story - I like where it was going. Then again, I'm a sucker for Shadowrun and Snow Crash.
Good luck with your writing, and thank you for writing this one.
| Jigoku no Yami 1/18/11 . chapter 9
its dark, nitty and gritty. its perfect! i wonder what has happened to the "Battosai" program...maybe those idiots can use it without the original program codes...
And where the heck is Himura? his girl is hurt.
| Fireotaku18 1/5/11 . chapter 9
I really liked this story, and i hope you update it.
| Leina 9/9/10 . chapter 9
Hobbies *INDEED* Oh, Misao...
This has got to be one of the most engaging RK AUs I've ever come across. I'm so glad I found it. Do you still update it here or anywhere else on the Net?
Kaoru's in way over her head, Misao's clearly more than she lets on (and I wonder what her angle is?) and I'm willing to bet that Sano's still in the dark about the last 12 hours of Kaoru's activity. I'm sure that won't last for long, though.
I can't wait to see if Kenshin or Battousai meets Kaoru next and if either one will be any more welcoming to her than their previous meetings. Neither has a reason to, at this point...
| Tinsnail 7/14/10 . chapter 9
Glorious! Fast-paced! Exciting! I hope you put up more of this story on this website. It is really quite exceptional.