Gods how I wish you'd update this story. I can't describe how much I love this fiction

I've been following this story on livejournal, and hence have read the updates to the story after this chapter was uploaded, but I feel it's more appropriate to comment here.

First off, I have to say that I have absolutely no suggestions for this story, I can't think of any flaw that needs to be pointed out because I think it's perfect! I've not gotten bored by reading any of it and I also have to say that although it takes place in an alternate universe, it feels so natural. Sometimes AUs have awkward moments or scenes that are written awkwardly and it ends up not flowing well (or it becomes hard for the reader to imagine the scenario) but that's not the case here!

You also do a wonderful job keeping everyone in character. Not an easy task given the plot.

Really love it, keep it up!

wow! this is an amazing story. i love it! it's so believable even though it's science fiction. please update this if you have the time.

Wow. Just WOW.

It takes a rare kind of story to get my blood pumping and my adrenaline kicking in, but yours accomplished that with a finesse that can't be matched!

The world that you've neatly slotted the RK characters into is richly woven and you've done great justice to their original personalities.

Looking at the last time you updated, I'm a little saddened, but I hope that you'll find the inspiration and time to continue this story in the near future! It's too fantastic a plot to let go!

This is a very good story, and it's interesting how you put explanations for the setting at the beginning. I hope you update soon!

AN interesting take on a RK AU. :D I love how you describe what's happening in detail; I can almost imagine myself there!

OMG! I love the fic so far. Although, I'm getting a little impatient waiting for Kenshin. Plz don't contribute this fic to my list of "great fics that have been discontinued". Update soon, PRETTY PLEASE?

I love this story! It's creative and unlike anything I've ever read - especially in the RK fandom. Please keep up the great work! I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter. :)

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ohh wow! awesome ! love this story please pdate soon!

awesome! unique plot...pls update soon...tnx!

simply amazing. the plot is riveting and your language is good. update soon! :)

So god! Ah I need an update and quick the suspence is killing me slowly.

Wow! Best Kenshin fanfic I've seen!
Please update when you can.

Excellent update! Misao had me laughing! ^-^ Please update ASAP!

OH YES! i think i yelled “Kansatsu tobikunai!” with misao when she threw her kunai... my neighbors think i'm crazy so this just justified their assumptions.

exciting story. i had delayed reading it because i never saw the 'cyberpunk' movie and wasn't sure i needed to to follow this. you did more than a good job in your explanations. now that i have read this and am appropriately appreciative i wait in eager anticipation for future installments!

a true pleasure,
ginny