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Joseph Santiago
2009-10-10 . chapter 10
Update soon!
chocolatefudgecake
2009-08-27 . chapter 10
OMG! You updated. :) It was so cool! :) Seriously, I prayed a couple of times for you to update your story. This story. And I am so happy that you did. :)

You are actually one of the greatest writers I've encountered. You create this story, write in details and make it come alive. I actually feel as if I was there. Honestly, you are a great writer.

I really do hope you are going to update soon. I'mma gonna subscribe you to author alert, just in case you update or something. :) Hope you do! :)
Ashley Jo
2009-05-19 . chapter 10
love the story
please continue
cutekeiko88
2009-05-16 . chapter 10
W0w! Im so happy to read it again. I already read the ending on your other site.. But im hoping that on this it will be a happy ending.. Its one of the best story here.. I send u a private message.pls reply on that.
Ken-Son4Hitokiri
2009-05-16 . chapter 10
that was great i cant wait to read more!
inu-yusukekaiba102
2009-05-16 . chapter 10
Please update!
othchick11
2009-05-08 . chapter 9
I absolutely love it so far! Please update soon!
YokoYuyGal
2009-04-14 . chapter 9
oh, so wrong...but I cant help but read it. any chance of an update?
DarkMignonette
2008-08-07 . chapter 9
Ah I adore this story so much!! I read the complete version of it on a different site, Keiko no Miko's page(I think, but I know it was on a Yu/Kei site). It's really difficult to find this quality of fanfiction for this pairing, so I was excited to read it.

It's incredibly bittersweet and moving, and written so well! I just can't get over that. xD It feels like you're reading a novel with the good descriptions and portrayal of emotions.

Anyway I'm happy it's now posted on here so I can add it to my favorites!
lovesanime92
2008-01-04 . chapter 9
I love it, I just hope that she dumps her husband and goes for him. I also have a question, does she have cancer or not? Cause I did not get that? Anyway I love the story, plz plz update soon ^_^.
saphemyst
2007-07-25 . chapter 1
you need to update... i slept really late last night 'coz i can't turn away from your story...

i'm a filipino by the way...
Kuwabarafangirl
2007-03-19 . chapter 9
Wow, i'm suprised that this hasn't gotten more reviews! It's really well written, for the most part, but there are some minor errors. You keep Yuusuke and Keiko very in-character, and their encounters and interactions seem very believable. I'm also very impressed with your knowledge of science.

Keep up the amazing work, and this is definetly going on my favorites.
DmonXtrmN8r
2007-02-24 . chapter 9
is that it? it says that this story is complete but you cant leave it like!! update soon (if your still writing it that is)
Ayaia of the Moon
2007-01-09 . chapter 1
I remember finding this story through the most random series of links...let's see...first it was through the top 100 Yu Yu Hakusho sites, then on to a Keiko/Yusuke site with fanfiction, of which there were several of yours. This one stuck out to me the most, and I was sad that I hadn't been able to find it, since that one site closed down...yet here you are.

:)Thanks for your nostalgia. I finally can re-read this story, and it's been bugging me for years.

~Ayaia of the Moon
Prizz
2006-12-18 . chapter 9
yeah~!

I wanna read the next chap already!

please update soN! ^_^ V,,
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