Wow. Enjoyable. Interesting...and even if they 'aren't supposed to exist' they're still fun to read about. I love how you've developed each of the characters--it's one thing you're really good at, besides having a head full of story ideas. And at not really leaving loose ends, either.
Sometimes you have a tendancy to tell and not just show, but it's not terribly noticable. I'm trying to actually criticize and it's not working. So--It's awful! I hate it! There's your lame critique.
Keep up the good work, tho.

Last comment was from me Morning Glory, the person who really felt you needed to make a comment towards about something that ended sourly about what two? Three months ago? God and Fairies aren't at the same rank, you can believe that they exist if you want, but fairies don't.

Fairies exist only in children's tales and fairytales, and the imagination. They are not real, people walking around with pointed ears had them surgically altered. Sorry to burst that bubble you live in.

Ay, 'ow mean ye be, leavin' me hangin' like dhat!! ;-)

When's the rest coming?

Ok, wow. Just got really interested. It's a little confusing at the moment with all the weird stuff happening, but it's not too bad. I'm positive it's all going to be explained later. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Whoa. That was...insane. Please update soon! I'd love to see what happens next.

Hm very interesting. I like it so far. Hope you update again soon, have fun in Italy!

~Dreamless_Mermaid~

ooh. this is good stuff.

I really like this! There's just the right amount of humor, your characters are compelling and you know how to create just the right amount of suspense. My only complaint is that it's so short haha. Now I have to go read your other Whistler stories...

I hope Italy is awesome :D

It's weird. A part of me doesn't want him to stay because he's free spirited Whistler and I don't think a kid is good for him or the married life, but on the other hand I want him to stay just 'cause it would be the right thing to do. Whatever you decide will be good though. Update soon.

Good story! I can't wait to see what happens to betsy and the baby. And I really wanna know whats up with this Whistler dude...really, really wanna know!

Hey! I can't say that this is my type of story, but I'm sure that other people luv it! I just wanted to say 'thanx' for the review on my story, and, yes, I am acutely aware that they didn't have sneakers in the 1900's. But, I can't say that I was as acutely aware of that at 11 o'clock last night. (smiles) Thanks, tho, for pointing that out. I'm sorry for being historically incorrect. You were my first constructive feedback, and for that I thank you. Please don't give up on me! I'll fix it!

~FM

Ah! I love Whistler so much. Goodness, after all the women he's been with Im just suprised it didn't happen sooner. I wasn't expecting that either. Good job, though. Keep 'em comin. I love Whistler stories.

Teeheehee. THat was funny!
“Well,” he said finally. “I certainly wasn’t expecting that.”
I like Whistler. And this is really intriguing. I love the mysterious aspect. Update soon!
Seize the Day!

I knew this was coming.
But I love the way you brought it about.
The way Betsy ignored him and then blew up at him - fantastic.
Great job, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
-Layne