Reviews for Naruto: Altered History

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dragonriderofp3rn 2008-10-11 ch 1,	abuselove the story! i've read Hyuga pilgrimage so far and i can tell i'll like this one. Update the sequel soon!
chill guy 2008-10-07 ch 32,	abuseMan this fic was great! Well written with a powerful Naruto and well developed pairings. I've already starting reading Shinboi Wars and I look forward to your update on that. Once again, awesome fic. chill guy
NaruHarem4ever 2008-10-02 ch 32,	abuseAWESOME STORY! This is without a doubt, one of the top 10 Naruto fanfics I have ever read. Looking forward to the sequel. Ja Ne!
Quicksaver007 2008-10-01 ch 2, anon.	abuseI just have a quick question. What was the 'toxic jutsu' that happened in the hospital a few days after the Kyuubi attack? Was it really another villiage's attack and Naruto survived because of the Kyuubi, or was it something that Naruto gave off, i don't know, maybe the Kyuubi trying to kill its prison?
FoxyGirl0413 2008-09-24 ch 32,	abuseawesome story...it was cool how you made it seem that if the village didn't know Naruto was the Kyuubi then everything would be different. Keep writing and i can't wait to read your other stories
ganstaninja 2008-09-18 ch 32,	abusethis naruto fis is just cool man. u had everything in this fic and also i hve to give u props , not alot of people keep there stories long each chap so i have to say thank you, and can't wait for "shinobi wars".
Innerstruggle88 2008-09-15 ch 8,	abuseThe Good Overall so far your actual writing and the idea of naruto getting taught by anko is kickass. Also some of the pairings sound intresting can't wait till you start to show some development in that area. The Bad There is a real lack of development skills wise naruto has been taught some taijutsu and some other minor things but thats really about it. The Ugly I've had to force myself to continue to read this fic at times mostly cause the fact naruto is so annoying. Ive read other fics where naruto is trained by anko, so i was naturally drawn to this fic. But wtf he seems to get more stupid as the fic progresses some of the things that come out naruto's mouth are just plain retarded. I'm going to press on and continue to read this fic and hope naruto dosen't act a total knob for the whole fic. Innerstruggle88
Neccor 2008-09-14 ch 32,	abusegreat story, love every bit of it, though I can't help but think of a moment when naruto would tell Anko to bite him, which, it would be safe to assume, she would literally do. Great story, one which is added to my favorites list. Onward to the sequel!
Byakugan789 2008-09-09 ch 31,	abuse/"Sure," Naruto deadpanned. "And right after that, Sasuke can grow a pair of wings and beat Anko's old sensei."/ Oh the irony. you do that type of thing alot. but then you havent sent sasu-teme on his betrayal arc yet... ;-P /Against her better judgment, Nii Yugito was going to keep Uzumaki Naruto's secret./ Oh! no possibility you'll have her defect is there? /Iruka froze, stared at her as the word sank in, and promptly toppled over. Her father clutched his chest and stumbled back, knocking over the pots of ramen./ ROFL. I like the pairing. /Indecision was all over her face, and Yuugao sighed. "Think about it, and, when you decide, come to the ANBU headquarters and ask for me."/ It's a good route for her, any possiblity you'll have her ask tsunade for any help as well? like sakura ino wa a natural at chakra control so medical jutsu would be a great addition to her repitoir. /For some reason, he didn't mind that he would have to explain that they came from Hinata. Amatsuyanagi Ryū; it somehow seemed fitting for her. There was an unexpected strength in both, and he wondered how long it would be before anyone else discovered that fact./ Oohh... instead of inventing a new form she rediscovers an old one. not bad. still confused about a great many parts of your hinata but this is cool at least. so gaara hasn't changed much and his sand is weakend. That bodes poorly for his fight agains whichever akatsuki you send after him. Any possibility you'll have him seek out naruto an jariya for a resealing? replacing his current seal with naruto's would do him good and there is precident both in cannon and fannon. Naruto's have an easyer time with fire than wind? huh? I suppose his wind nature chakra could easily be enhancing his fire spells subconciously... so is danzo going to kill them or play puppet master??
Byakugan789 2008-09-08 ch 30,	abuseAw...D': you sent yugito-chan back? Please tell me you at least kept the lightning blade for ino. it is a family heirloom after all. besides that there was a large bounty on it's recovery before naruto destroyed it in the anime.
Byakugan789 2008-09-08 ch 29,	abuseOnly academy level skills outside of her demon arts? That's an odd path to take. Though i suppose she doesn't need much with death touch. As a point of interest nekomata spirits were also puppet masters who tortured those who displeased them by raising their dead relatives and having them attack or berate them.
Byakugan789 2008-09-08 ch 28,	abusePity you had to kill zabuza and haku, especially as it seemes you had them join up with kanoha after the fiasco at wave. great fight scenes though. As a point of interest, I'm not sure if it's intended or simply mistakes but this chapter had an anoying number of sentances with seemingly random words missing. nothing serious but it did take a bit of translation.
Byakugan789 2008-09-07 ch 27,	abuseI thought you might be interested to know that you, or more likely your transcriber, has been making a rather interesting set of constant... gramatical errors. You, or more likely it, has switched all instances of the word their with they're and vice-versa. nothing really important but annoying none the less. Anyways, nice chapter. looking forward to a good fight in the next one. Out of curiosity though, why is a leagendary swordsman using an ornate spear?
Byakugan789 2008-09-06 ch 26,	abuseI could be wrong since you've skewed the timeline 6 ways from sunday, but didn't they wait a full three years after learning diffinitivly of naruto to start going after the jinchuriki? I believe their explanation is they wanted to know the locations of all 9 before they started collecting but the point is still there.
Byakugan789 2008-09-06 ch 25,	abuse...So hinatas mom is still alive,.. Hizashi is still alive,.. and you've given hinata the same personality problems because? You said you had the Uchiha massacre and Hizashi's sacrifice called off at the beginning, so I'm struggeling to see why hinata is still so messed up in this one. Polite and not particularly agressive? sure. same situation and personality problems with out the underlying causes being present in your AU?.. I'm lost. I do appreciate your not getting rid of a possibly cool charactor just after introducing them though =D grins Mikomi >0.0< "Kakashi sincerely prayed that Tsunade accepted the job. If not, Kakashi would be extremely tempted to offer it to Naruto, just for the hell of it." mad cackleing ensues

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