oh... goodness. Very poetic. Adding to my favs and my C2. Hope you don't mind.

This was really good - I especially like the part in brackets in the first section "but that's the way time is ... sometimes the knots slip" - that part. Well written, good job!

Like an e.e. cummings poem. So beautiful.

Oh poor Romana, I liek Romana, so she survied and then she died? Well I like it very much.
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