 charlie-becks 2008-11-20 . chapter 21its bloody brilliant, i absolutly loved it :) its actually like reading a sequel to the book, if u overlook the changes u made at the church, i really loved this story :D |
 An-Jelly-Ca 2007-01-19 . chapter 21loved it, loved everything in the series! |
 RockerLane1110 2007-01-12 . chapter 21That was a good ending. I almost thought it would start out with the actual beginning of The Outsiders but still this is an interesting spin to it. Can't wait to see what other stories you come up wtih! |
 Aeris5256 2006-12-30 . chapter 21very very good! I'm sad to see the end, but it was a wonderful trilogy.
And so, I bid you adieu. thank you for such a great story.
"Nature's first green is gold.
Her hardest hue to hold.
her early leaf's a flower
but only so an hour.
The leaf subsides to leaf.
So Eden sank to grief
So dawn goes down to day.
Nothing gold can stay."
~Robert Frost |
 tomisaqt 2006-12-30 . chapter 21Hey. I got your email. Yeah, I kept looking for the email, and it never came. I didn't get a chance to look at it, but I'm glad I did. I'm sad that it came to an end, but I'm glad that it ended happy with none of the deaths that the actual book included. I love how you made the characters your own (in a way, if that makes since it makes since to me :)) I hope you write more because you have some awesome talent. I would hate to see it go to waste if you don't write more! Keep me posted when the new story goes up!
~Brianna/tomisaqt~ |
 Sodapop02 2006-12-27 . chapter 21I can't believe it's over! I think this trilogy has the best plots I've ever read. I'm sorry to see it go...Have anything else you're going to write for The Outsiders? I hope so b/c I bet it would be awesome. |
 Pictures 2006-12-27 . chapter 21Sorry i haven't been reviewing as much, my computer is a little wacked and i cant review or the whole internet goess down and that little thing where it says 'error found, dont send and send' goes up. but i want you to knoww i've ben reading the whole time and since it's over i thought i would let the internet go down and give you a review =]
I'm going to miss this story, it was my favorite one.
I'm glad everything worked out with Johnny and his fosters parentss =].
And i like how you ended it, even though it's short, it's nicee and very well done...
aww man i'm just going to miss this story!
but i can't wait until you bring up another story i could learn to lovee and read.=]
Well, great story =]
it was my favorite.
~Heidi. |
 GGDancer4life 2006-12-23 . chapter 20You are a great writer.
I think you should continue writing this story because it is so great.
keep writing.
Happy Holidays!
Gina |
 RockerLane1110 2006-12-23 . chapter 20Happy *whatever you celebrate because I sure as hell ain't a mind reader*! I missed reading this cuz I had so much stuff I ahd to do and now I've got midterms coming up after winter break. But it was a great story. It made me sad though. I have sympathyfor Steve and his cold considering I have one too right now. Too bad, no fourology. Well, there's only so much you can write on one plotline, maybe it's better that way. |
 ivy45663 2006-12-21 . chapter 20Aw I loved that chapter. It's great. |
 An-Jelly-Ca 2006-12-21 . chapter 20Wait theres not goign to be another one? Either way I lvoed htis chapter and the netire sotry! update sooN! |
 R.G. Waffles 2006-12-21 . chapter 20'Loha!
Darnit, I didn't see when this chapter was updated! Meh . . . I thought I would get the chance to review as soon as you updated, but I just came back from THE LAST DAY OF SCHOOL (before 2 weeks of winter vaca) and I saw THIS! Woot! Another thing to make my day!
Aw, Poor Darry . . .
Aw, Poor Steve! . . .
Aw, Poor Pony . . .
Aw, Poor Soda. Well, actually, not really because he hasn't done anything sad, but I wanted to keep the pattern!
Whoa, deja vu with Pony and Darry!
This part: "Yeah, I know. Go on, you goof." Had me laughing because I pictured Steve punching Goofy playfully for some reason ^_^
Damn, it's "Let's all play the Guilt Game" day! Everyone is blaming themselves . . . wow. It's like one giant chain reaction. You know what? It's all S.E. Hinton's fault for making the story go that way! Period.
Now it's Poor Two-Bit and his Mama.
Jelly and Eggs! And excellent couple if I must say so myself!
Sorry this review wasn't as long as the others. I'm just so excited that I have two weeks of winter vacation! But man, this is the last chapter? Before the epilogue? WAAH! Dammit, it's so sad to see this story end! I love this! Peace n Mahalo! Happy Holidays!
-D.A.- |
 SilverStorm06 2006-12-16 . chapter 19cool chapter, I'm glad you didn't do it the way you were originally going to. :) |
 An-Jelly-Ca 2006-12-13 . chapter 19Great chapter! Update soon I can't wait 4 more! It was so good! :0) |
 An-Jelly-Ca 2006-12-13 . chapter 18It's okay I have not updated my stories in over two weeks. Lool. If my readers don'y hate me, we can't hate you! Lol. ANyways aboslutely loved it! |