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| ramona 2008-03-23 ch 12, anon. | abusegood story, just a hint though when it comes to hotches child name ...It is jack Mind u , u got right the last time u mentioned his sons name. one other autho thinkls hotches child is a girl lol maybe a little more viewing research on the tv series and the charaters. ramona |
| martina aka the Celt 2008-03-13 ch 12, anon. | abuseLove your work but I would really like to know what happened when Hotch went to see Reid finally...lots of holding and hugs I hope, maybe you could do that in your sequel? If so that would be awesome... |
| martina 2008-03-12 ch 12, anon. | abuseIncredible...sequel please with lots of Reid and Hotch... |
| martina aka the Celt 2008-03-01 ch 12, anon. | abuseA sequel would be TERRIFIC. with lots and lots of Hotch/Reid...heaven |
| martina aka the Celt 2008-02-28 ch 12, anon. | abuseI loved this but I SO WISH you had written about when Hotch went to see Reid and what happened between them...that would have been so cool...otherwise it was suberb, thank you |
| editor frog 2008-02-04 ch 12,  | abuseThis was absolutely wonderful. Spot on with the characterizations; good pacing, nice touches with the twists in the plot. I would so love to see a sequel to this one--mainly because I'm a Reid nut and would like to see how both he and Hotch cope with the aftermath of this. Excellent work. |
| 101spacemonkey 2007-08-11 ch 9, | abusei just had a horrifying idea is louise going to be at the BAU office and shoot Hotch, and what about Reid, he will be alright, wont he, god knows i enjoy fic to be a bit dark so long as it has a happy ending but this is getting me worried. |
| 101spacemonkey 2007-08-11 ch 8, | abusedid reid just say that? i mean, omg, i know he still has drugs in his system, wait a minute, he does right? this isnt like psychological stuff, because if so its goin to require alot of comfort to bring him back, oh, and why wasnt he killed? or is it all part of some even bigger plot? |
| -Hidden-Wolves- 2007-07-22 ch 12, | abuseThat was great. It made me cry and...man it was just wonderful! There was a few little mistakes though out it, but nothing that you can't read past, so that was ok. I also think the time frame at the end was a little long. 3 months? I don't know that justr seems to long...but what ever it don't make that much of a differnce. GOOD JOB! |
| weemcg33 2007-05-21 ch 12, | abuseThat was a really great story, very well written and i thoroughly enjoyed every bit. Well done!! |
| soccer2010 2007-04-18 ch 12, | abusehey it's me "Reid_lover2010 from the other site and anyway this is a GREAT story please please make a sequel I would so read it |
| princessako 2007-04-15 ch 12, | abusegreat story. i really liked it. you even made me cry while reading. which i don't get, since no one died. |
| PacWoman 2007-03-07 ch 12, | abuseWonderful story! I read this all in one day, it was a good way to spend the afternoon. I found myself getting very into this story and, at times, crying with the characters. Also this story was very well written and the description that you used was amazing. The story was so detailed, I felt like I was sitting there with the characters. Good luck on your future stories. |
| WinifredONiel 2007-02-19 ch 12, | abuseSuperb! Well thought out and with a perfect touch on the mental health issues. One of the best stories I've read in this fandom, or any other. Please write more! |
| luvs and hugs 2007-01-14 ch 8, anon. | abusemy god! That chapter freaked the living hell out of me. You are a good writer!! i don't think anybody or anything has freaked me out like that in a while. |