This is a good story. I like the point you made about superheroes not always being able to prevent evil. Tragedies happen all the time, and this was a rare catastrophe that wasn't prevented. We will remember. 9-11-2001

This was brilliant. I like the different emotions you put each of them through, especially the humility and humbleness.

it's great dude

Wow, this was well done, and I think that you wrote how the Stronghold family would deal with this tragedy very well.

hey,

this was an awesome oneshot, it's such an interesting idea to do the 9/11 tradegy from a superhero's viewpoint. Last night i watched a docudrama on 9/11 and it was so depressing, it made me want to write about the heros who sacrificed their safety and lives for others. You put into words some of the feelings i felt about writing about.

P.s. love your story about lydia, keep on writing.